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Topic: My first draw

itx
Newbie

Member # 237

posted 11-08-2004 06:23 PM

Hi , its my first drawing and want to improve , So some comments would really be appreciated

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Angelo
Extreme Member

Member # 134

posted 12-08-2004 12:16 AM

Interesting pic. What you should do is make her forearm bulge a little less (depends if you're after correct proportions in future), and make a her eyes a little smaller and slightly further apart. Aside from that, I see potential in your artwork, so keep going. Post up more stuff, ok?

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itx
Newbie

Member # 237

posted 12-08-2004 11:50 AM

well my second try , soft shading this time

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Angelo
Extreme Member

Member # 134

posted 12-08-2004 05:06 PM

Hey nice one. I think your sof shading is better than the cel-shading you used (then again, I am a soft-shading addict

). I guess my only complaint would be the hair, perhaps it would benefit from not being straight at the bottom, instead splitting like hair usually does. However, this is upto you. Once again, good picture.

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ColorFool
Junior Member

Member # 240

posted 26-08-2004 02:53 AM

Your first one had strange perportions, and the face was a bit weird. But I would say that the second one showed that you could be developing your own style :-)

I am new at manga/CGing too, so ya know....

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itx
Newbie

Member # 237

posted 26-08-2004 08:01 AM

yah well... in my first drawing i tried to draw eyes that i've seen somewhere , but i screwed up... badly - you can see that for your self

Besides does anyone know any tutorials on how to color, shade spiky hair ? well any hair actually

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