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Artistic Assassin
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posted 13-02-2002 03:35 PM     Profile for Artistic Assassin   Author's Homepage   Email Artistic Assassin     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
sup everybody
...while i was makin tha 1st tutorial for my site, i had a few ideaz run threw my head for a new character, so i grabbed a sheet of paper an did a real quick 10 min sketch...shez still in tha making so she aint much of a character right now...and i aint real sure if thiz iz how shell stay or not...so i figured id get some opinions on how she lookz so far before i go an change anything... im thinkin bout reducing her breast size BIG time and, i also aint thought up a good outfit for her yet eitha so shez kinda in tha nude right now...any suggestionz would be appreciated=)

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Bugsy
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posted 13-02-2002 03:56 PM     Profile for Bugsy   Author's Homepage   Email Bugsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
looks great! but yeah, I'd also consider making her breasts smaller (at this size they should be pulled down more by gravity too )
Outfits aren't my forte by far, but I can easily picture her in something tight (cliché tho it is, you could turn it into something original)

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Bomu
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posted 13-02-2002 08:11 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool picture Artistic Assassin- good proportion and the face and hair style's good - I'm sure we'll be seeing your usual beached blond with black roots CG for that eh?

For the eyes though you might wanna consider drawing in smaller pupils so you'll have some space to colour the Iris. Her forearm also looks too curvey in the middle, a little like Popeye so you might want to start of with a fatter mass towards the elbow join, which gets smaller towards the wrist.

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gramps
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posted 13-02-2002 10:30 PM     Profile for gramps   Author's Homepage   Email gramps     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
looks great, if it weren't for the fact that i'll undoubtedely colours this at some point, i wouldn't suggest it, but a few sizes down perhaps. It's a bitch when every reply is about breasts.

as for outfit - how about something adventurous like a strong theme - kinda like Shirow would do, big costumes, or make her only partially human or some shit.

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Artistic Assassin
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posted 13-02-2002 11:04 PM     Profile for Artistic Assassin   Author's Homepage   Email Artistic Assassin     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
thanx for all ur cnc everybody=)

Bugsy:thanx ...yea i see what ur sayin...but tha only reson her titz iz so jacked up lookin iz cuz i know whatever oufit i do put on her iz gon keep them puppies up there, lol ...plus they are implants, an some how implants tend to defy gravity some how lol=P

Bomu: lol ha actually i want this character ta be different an stand out more than my other 2 chix (Jade&Saffire) so ill probly do brown hair wit black rootz, lol=P tha eyez iz jus a lil sumthin different im tryin out...not sure if ill keep em like that or not, but ill keep ur comment in mind.
and i see what ur sayin bout tha forearm, ill fix that too, thanx=)

Gramps: ha , u know ur alwayz welcome ta lay down ur phat ass colorz on my pics=D
not sure who Shirow iz ,but ur idea bout makin her part human and part sumthin else iz tight , infact u jus gave me a idea...oooo heeeeeeelll yyyeeeaaa baby!
thanx man, ill post tha update az soon az i get it done

thanx again everybody=)
ill be back lata tonight and crit some others artwork.

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AKATT
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posted 05-04-2002 10:27 PM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
You coudln't post the URL for your pic in question could you? For some reason when I try and vew it in the forum it doesn't load and all I get is that little white boc with a red cross.

Sorry to be a pain but I really want to check it out.

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Bomu
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posted 06-04-2002 01:24 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Look's like Assassin's web server 50megs.com has now disabled outside linking

Akatt, you can check out the clothed version here: http://assassin.inc.50megs.com/Exstacy_sketchupdate.html

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CoolOtaku
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posted 04-05-2002 09:03 PM     Profile for CoolOtaku   Author's Homepage   Email CoolOtaku     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I like the proportions on it because I have trouble with that a lot of the time. It's just a good pic. Everyone else pointed out all of the bad things. dang.

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 04-05-2002 10:08 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Everyone else pointed out all of the bad things. dang.

well he posted the Pic nearly 4 month ago not a deal .

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