I think the lower half of her body looks fine (crazy footwear tho )

I hate to say this 9cos it's such a good sketch and all) but I reckon there's something not quite right with her top half. Okay here goes - there's a problem with the left half of her body. Maybe the shoulder needs to be defined a bit more or maybe her left arm comes across too much (I just can't put my finger on it).

Oh and I think her breast should be a bit smaller (but that's all down to style isn't it).

The breast indicates that we see the torso from the site but from a site view the arm connects at the end.
But the rest of the pose indicates that we see the torso more from behind and then would the breast be more hidden from us (even at this size ).

Well, I guess your best try to correct this is looking for photos with a similar pose.
Also drawing a line in, that shows where the spine is, could help showing how much the torso is turned.

but its still a great pic and it would make a great piece for Inking practice and coloring for others.

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Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Otherwise, I think she's very good - though, bear in mind the other crits people have given to her upper half - cute face and hairstyle, methinks!

Um... I tried drawing that character you did and it came out okay I guess and I even kept everything they say was wrong. (sob I don't see it.)Would you mind if I posted my pic on my website if I gave the link to the original pic done by you?
just wondering. I didn't want you to find out and get mad or anything so just tell me yes if I do so and so or no.