more details will be in it(hopefull they go well with the pose).

oh and allready a update bigger in resolution
but smaller in size (cool he ).

I blocked out the perspective of the important FG and BG (did it on PC with Vector Lines seems to be a good technic).
only thing that bugs me a bit is the laptop doesnt look like it is on the desk but I will see how it looks when it cast a shadow on the desk.

so back to the pencil and adding sommore detail's.

[ 06-05-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

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I've added a few more details, which might help pad it out a little, and fixed that laptop, rather than explaining it. I've lowered the floor and made the desk shallower. You might wanna change 'em back - just suggestions

and thanks with the laptop and table I will work it in.

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Pixie Nimit's a firsttime to me never paid much (or enough) attention to BG myself which is a shame 'couse normaly I had some BG in mind.

Dragonfly you just read my mind, a big window was what I wanted to have.
In it since I came up with the setting.
For the character uhm mix lex luther with pamela anderson and give her a master degree in genetics.
In other words eviloverlord that wants to wipeout the human race and then recolonize earth with her own creations.

That in mind I wanted to have a clean (almost steril) kinda fell to the office.
Btw. here is another update I think I'm finished with the layout stuff and can move to the final pencils (just have to find a way to blow it up to A3 or A4).

hope the laptop is better.

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and the laptop looks loads better... looking forward to seeing some colour on this one, man... Quite enjoying seeing the steps that better artists than me take to creating something actually worthwhile... it's interesting...

Bomu, have you ever considered posting the stages as you create a piece of artwork? I'd be really interested in seeing it... (you know, they do it a lot on Dhabih... but with Painter, which isn't much use to me...)

In fact, if anyone fancies doing this, I think it'd be cool... I could learn something from you lot!
hey, maybe I'll even do it myself...

Pixie

[ 09-05-2002: Message edited by: Pixie Nim ]

Also what's the thing under the desk? I don't really know the character u see.

so lets see.

Pixie Nim
good eyes you got there I never thought about it.
But your right it would cover too much of here, infact it would hide all here lower clothing (and that could imply things I wasn't looking for).

oh and go on and post something in this posting style 'couse its allways good to see other ways of getting things done (and your way better then me I just got a lucky day here).

collumn&pillars
Bomu, AKATT you both made me think about them more (when I made them I just wanted them so the window isn't the only thing in the back).
so the circle's getting fixed expect for the last where the endpart starts.and there just for decoration (elexis bought a ancient collumn in rome and cut it into two halfs and added them to give the Window a visual frame'ing).

Bomu
instaid of making every halfhour a screenshot you could just make a video and comment them afterwards(I think there are programs that makes avi's out of your screen movements.
Personaly I prefer the ultra short tuts. and if your tutorial is to long more people will stop reading in the middle.

AKATT
It is a creature she created as her little dog(not in game I came up with it)and it chews on a bone(the last employer who did a mistake ).

For this posting style I think of it like having people standing behind you, while you do your work.
The viewers see how the creator do his stuff.
And can ask alot of questions they never could when they only see the drawing.The artist gets feedback of his work and can change stuff when he realizes that something is wrong.
And the best thing is, it is more relaxing than haveing real persons behind your back (no one makes funny noises, people dont complain that your to slow and stuff like this).

phu a monster post and those who read so far
wont even get an update.

but incase I enlarged and printed to do the final pencils and it has crown(its now on 4 A4 sheets making it an A2) hopefully I get the pencils done over the weekends.

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so after a ultra long drawing day.
I present the final pencils.

now I can sit back and see how the inker and colorist do their jo... what do you mean no money for them...fuck. I guess back to the drawing table .

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aw man its looking good :3 and lowering the table is a good idea since we can see more of her gorgeous legs! XB

I think with the backgrounds the buildings look as if they are just across the road :3 adding extra floors and a billion more windows! X3 should help with the perspective a little, oh I noticed with the roundish building that you've drawn the lines bending outwards, it feels like we are looking up at it from below

infact I think you may have to straighten the buildings, since we are at a good distance away from the window and looking straight ahead and most likely really high up, theres not much of a perspective with tall and close buildings.

I think I'm being picky with the perspective Xp

and tnx again for your help.

Bomu I don't even wanna know what is also wrong (only 65 hours left argh....:scared

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Well the buildings have been mentioned

The window doesn't seem to be ina frame. Know whatta i mean? It may look more realistic if the window had a frame around it.

Is there someone else in the room? I think that the cigar is facing the wrong way. If she just put it down she's more likely to put it down with the grip part facing her. It kinda looks like the cigar belongs to someone else.

Last problem i noticed - there seems to be a crease going all the way down the page

yeah the frame for the window bugged me a bit too but I decided to fake one with a bold outline .

the scan isn't the best but the finished vrsion will be clean.

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sidenote I Inked it and if I can't finish the colors the lines get posted.

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but don't have the time to correct it (hopefully the colors will cover the errors ).

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