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Ayzie
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posted 18-05-2002 01:23 AM     Profile for Ayzie   Author's Homepage   Email Ayzie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey all, sweet, it's Friday!! I thought I'd give another go at doing a semi-realistic portrait (first picture). It really sucks cuz it just doesn't look right to me.

There are tons of errors and I can't find a way to fix em. Especially the jaw line area. I was fooling with it forever. I'm sick of looking at it, so I hope some1 with a fresh pair of eyes can help me figure out what's wrong

The second picture is one I did a while ago, but never finished. I'm considering it done now tho! It's a close-up of a dude's face.

Anyway, C&Cs please! and thanks!


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AKATT
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posted 18-05-2002 03:59 AM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey man, cool work. with the girl i think it might help if you made the shadows more darker. This would help define her jaw. Also maybe the eyes are a bit too far apart??

The old dude looks really cool. Is this part of a larger pic or is that the whole? Personally i caqn't see anything wrong with the old dude, but let the others see. Nice site by the way, tho your gallery is down.

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the metalman
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posted 18-05-2002 07:14 AM     Profile for the metalman   Email the metalman     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
its probably just the eyes on the first pik....or shorten the urr...i dunno wht u call it..cheek marks..

the 2nd pick is fine

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Bomu
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posted 19-05-2002 05:47 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
They're looking great - the fact you havn't left a lot of white areas around is definetly a bonus. I agree that the 2nd pics looks fine, but the first... Hmm, there's something really strange about that one. Firstly , I thought she looks a little odd - slightly disproportionate factical features. Then I thought it looked really scary almost like one of those kids from the "Come to Daddy" music video by Aphex Twin *lol In that sence I'd leave it and say she's ment to look like that ^o^

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Ayzie
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posted 20-05-2002 12:24 AM     Profile for Ayzie   Author's Homepage   Email Ayzie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey all, thx for the feedback! She does look freaky looking heheh I tried to make a few adjustments, I think it turned out alright (ha!). The freaky/scary look wasn't intended, but I sorta like it now heheh.

Anyway here's the update. I changed the placement of her eyes, the cheek marks, her jawline, and did some other minor fixes.



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