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sinmaster7
Junior Member

Member # 45

posted 18-05-2002 01:35 AM

I intend to make him look like his unconcious body is drifting through seaweed. I have yet to draw the seaweed, just looking for crits on the body right now...

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the metalman
Grand Member

Member # 42

posted 18-05-2002 07:19 AM

har har thats a funny picture..it seems to have a story behind it...

Man has fun at a beach party.
Man found next morning by seashore with Bud Light in hand.

it looks fine to me...cept maybe the nose...his nostrils look odd...or thats maybe just how he looks

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 19-05-2002 02:39 AM

looks realy impresive could be from some pirate story.

only crit I have is his head.
It looks like he is holding his head above the water but when he is stunned he couldn't, I would let the head fall back abit into the water/seaweed.

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 19-05-2002 01:32 PM

Yeah looks impressive! Don't have anything to add :

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 19-05-2002 05:55 PM

Yeah, he looks rough and like a cave man/neanderthal! If that's what you were going for, you did a great job with it! ^_^ And you did a good job with his chest muscels (pectorials).

Still not a fan of lined paper though

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sinmaster7
Junior Member

Member # 45

posted 19-05-2002 10:09 PM

I hear you on that. Luckily, though, I was able to erase those nasty blue lines as I CG'ed it:

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 20-05-2002 03:49 AM

cool pic sinmaster. looks really good now you've coloured it.

sorry this is short but i'm mrevsising as i rite?

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 20-05-2002 10:32 AM

Yeah, looks really atmospheric now it's rendered- the stronger use of shadows works really well!

Sorry this is short also, I'm not revising, but supposed to be working ^_^

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sinmaster7
Junior Member

Member # 45

posted 20-05-2002 02:35 PM

Thank you everyone for the c&c. I'm thinking about maybe adding some lighting effects and if and when I do I will be sure to post the revision.

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Bryan
Newbie

Member # 58

posted 22-05-2002 09:47 PM

Hey that looks pretty cool, nice work on the cg... I just wanted to say that maybe you should've had his head back.... so he would look more limp...and not so stiff but thats just a suggestion. Good Job

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sinmaster7
Junior Member

Member # 45

posted 23-05-2002 12:31 AM

Thanks! I thought about tilting his head back, but then I thought that it would make more sense to me if his head sort of floated. It just seems like a part of the body that would tend to be, well, boyant.

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Bryan
Newbie

Member # 58

posted 23-05-2002 05:55 AM

Well, either way it would look good.... And just to say heads do seem to be more boyant than the rest of a human body... but whatever it your pic.

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