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tuigi
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posted 01-06-2002 11:13 PM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
http://www.geocities.com/tuigi42/sportgirl.jpg

this is where you will find my picture
copy/paste or drag/drop
to see it

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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi


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AKATT
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posted 01-06-2002 11:25 PM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
the body on the pic seems to be in proportion with itself but the head is a little too big (unless she was supposed to be a really young girl).

the other thing i can see is that the eye is set too far back. it should be closer to the edge of the face.

keep it up.

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Bomu
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posted 02-06-2002 08:21 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey, what ever happened to being too busy with exams to draw, Tuigi?

Well, I think we're making progress- I see you've attempted a side view, which is never easy. One thing I will say - narrow down her forarms into a wrist, then widen out into a hand, then add the fingers. I think on your last one, you had the same problem of not really drawing a 'hand', but simply attaching fingers to a stub, which is something you wanna try an avoid!

Also, as Akatt said, try to shrink your character's heads a little more - then they'll be more in proportion with the rest of her body.

The collor bones stand out; so change them by flipping vertically Remember collar bones are handel bars shaped - you've draw upside down handel bars!

Improve on the points mentioned and we'll see where we can go from there

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Shirai
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posted 03-06-2002 01:34 AM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hmm... lol its hard to find something that hasn't been critiqued on Xp only thing I can say is her shoulder should curve down rather than looking so bold X3 other than that everything looks fine~

Keep drawing~ :3


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tuigi
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posted 03-06-2002 11:20 AM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
tnkz for the comments i will try to remember that.

about my exams, i actually drew this after one of my exams,when i m done whit one a peice of paper usually pops up and i start scribbeling(this was done after a Geographie and french exam by the way)

the reaction of the teachers always amazes me
you should try and see what it does whit your teachers

and i have an exam today,so which me luck and pheraps if i have the time after this one i will draw somethin.


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if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi


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