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sentient
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posted 22-06-2002 06:17 AM     Profile for sentient   Author's Homepage   Email sentient     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hi im new, "the metalman" refered me here. heres a sketch i did, comment or flame my bad skillz w/e.

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Bomu
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posted 22-06-2002 10:04 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey sentient, welcome aboard.
That's not bad for a sketch. One thing I always stress if for people to get proprtion and anatomy right, and you're definetly already getting there
To improve you could define the hair better. Not nessasarily trying to draw each individual strand, but bunch it together and show it's direction or it'll look like a solid mass. And if you want to get better, spend a little time practiving hands and feet I still suck at them sometimes, but they can greatly improve a character drawing if you include them.
Keep it up!


As you'll soon notice- Despite having a Speak & Spell machine as a child, I still can't string a decent paragrph together :P

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 22-06-2002 12:39 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hehe don't panic we're to cool to flame .

I like it, my only critic besides of the stuff bomu said, is that the handle of the sword looks like it is a little bit to high to be proper connected to the blade.

oh and wellcome onboard the board.

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sentient
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posted 22-06-2002 01:58 PM     Profile for sentient   Author's Homepage   Email sentient     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
thx guys i appreciate it. i think im might scrap that drawing but work on the character, so expect to see more drawings from me soon.
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G.i.A.m.
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posted 22-06-2002 09:38 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yeah keep'em coming.

And how is the weather in your town .

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Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.

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the metalman
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posted 22-06-2002 10:58 PM     Profile for the metalman   Email the metalman     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
maybe its just the clothes dude...
his robe,dress :d thingy looks kinda ...plain...give him some accessories, clothing prints, armor...etc.
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