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Pencil Soldier
Grand Member

Member # 64

posted 26-06-2002 09:15 PM

Im gonna ink and color it,but wanted to know if theres anything wrong with it before i do.
This is it:

[ 26-06-2002: Message edited by: Pencil Soldier ]

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 26-06-2002 09:22 PM

major spelling error
check your link

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Pencil Soldier
Grand Member

Member # 64

posted 26-06-2002 09:24 PM

viola!!
(actuly,i dont think it liked the space in the name,so i renamed it.)

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 27-06-2002 09:32 AM

This one looks a lot more solid than your female character.. Granted it was a 1st try. The giant pencil turned out well, the proportions arn't too bad, but as metalman mentioned in an earlier thread, the neck looks too abnormally long. Maybe add some more details like shoe laces and trim on the clothes and I reckon it'd improve it lots.

But isn't it a little big for an avatar?

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 28-06-2002 12:50 PM

looks like it could make a good avatar.

The pencil gets smaller near his neck leaving the impression that the pencil bends around his neck.
Use a ruler to get it right also add a little foreshortening to it.

And as Bomu said more details.

Bomu I'm sure you made the ninja straight in a 80*80 square .

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Pencil Soldier
Grand Member

Member # 64

posted 28-06-2002 03:35 PM

I changed the pencil,it looks right now,and added some detail to the pants and shirt.as for the neck,thats a style issue.If youve seen the Final Fantasy Tactics art,they got real long necks too.so do alot of other people.

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clarion
Junior Member

Member # 7

posted 28-06-2002 06:20 PM

Thing is, those necks fit the style. Here, it looks kind of like someone pulled on his head for a while and stretched his neck out.

I think you're better off to go ahead and make this proportional.

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