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sentient
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Member # 62

posted 26-06-2002 10:38 PM

ok heres a quick sketch i did, been workin on proportions and such. this character is called Arkada'somethin'somethin or other, havent come up with it yet, and she is a jedi, and a very powerful one at that. note: this is far from done, and i have to work in the clothes and cape.

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the metalman
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Member # 42

posted 27-06-2002 05:25 AM

id work on the boobies..yo..

i think usually they dont go their own directions....they are more closer together...

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 27-06-2002 09:37 AM

The anatomy is definetly an improvment over Lara.
- I still think you could round off those breasts a little better since their shape looks as those they're sagging to the sides.
- Make the forearm holding the sword a little shorter and the hand a little bigger.
- Clean up the scan >_<
- Continure to improve like this

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tuigi
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Member # 51

posted 27-06-2002 04:02 PM

the body sems unbalanced i dont know why does anyone else see that?
sorry i can t help you more than that,the rest of teh picture is ok

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the metalman
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Member # 42

posted 27-06-2002 04:53 PM

iwas imagining...her jumping down from a platform and she suddenly gets up...yeah kinda strange but thats how it looks

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 27-06-2002 06:01 PM

i get it:while teh legs seem to come straight down the upper part of the body seems to be leaning down

p.s:bomu check your e-mail

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 28-06-2002 12:44 PM

Yup her upper body is falling back.
Like someone/something strong is moving closer to her and she try's to avoid bodycontact without stepping back, but I think it is ok so.

the yaw line still needs a little improvement, but you are doing good so far.

Looking forward to an update.

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clarion
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Member # 7

posted 28-06-2002 06:17 PM

You forgot hips.

Her legs are kind of melting out of her torso. Remember to draw the pelvis area, then have the legs coming out from the appropriate joints.

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