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animeOptical
Junior Member

Member # 63

posted 03-07-2002 01:57 AM

Here's a kawaii little pic I started... please give me some feedback so far, I plan on using her in a challenge in the PK boards.

http://www.freewebhost.biz/animeoptical/kawaiiii.jpg

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sentient
Member

Member # 62

posted 03-07-2002 03:37 AM

hmm i like it, but it needs completion

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Ayzie
Grand Member

Member # 25

posted 03-07-2002 04:14 AM

i love it! finish it finsh it!

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the metalman
Grand Member

Member # 42

posted 03-07-2002 05:06 AM

that really looks like a pose that i would do, no doubt....
you draw very neatly

its kool but i think u should finsih the bottom a lill more..looks undone
it would look kool colored..cuz its simple

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Bomu
Moderator

Member # 1

posted 03-07-2002 06:32 PM

I'm glad you said it's still a work in progress, 'cos you're definetly on the right track with this one, but just needs more doing to it. Perhaps her arms look a little to far bent inwards tho? Looking forward to the finished product!

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 03-07-2002 09:41 PM

Hm the shoulders look too small, try to lower the start of the arms.
And I would say draw her left breast (her side) over the arms, instead of under it you have right now (should look especial good with what Bomu said).

other than that I have to agree super good.

btw. the Inking is good, digital or on paper?

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the metalman
Grand Member

Member # 42

posted 03-07-2002 10:41 PM

heh now that i look at it longer...i notice the arms and the shoulders too...X_X

they are too thin...

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 03-07-2002 10:43 PM

wow - really cool head. You've gotta finish inking this and colour it in. The only critic i would say is that her right forearm bends a bit too much.

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animeOptical
Junior Member

Member # 63

posted 03-07-2002 11:56 PM

Hey Thanks a lot for the comments!

This in penciled right now, the scan came out rather dark -_-; derr.... Hehe. Somebody else asked me about the "inking" XD
I will be finishing this =) I will post as I go along... When i get it done you may feel free to CG ^_^

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