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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 17-07-2002 01:31 PM

not much to say about it. http://www.malech.net/Artus/Pics/luft.png

any critics before I Ink and CG it.

[ 27-07-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

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Bomu
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posted 17-07-2002 09:46 PM

Looks good enough to continue with to me! But to be picky, maybe a smaller nose? I'm think smaller, button nose = cuter. Lose those strech marks her those bands are around her leg. The bottom of the gas canister looks a little odd, like it's not finished?
The rest's fine.

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AKATT
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posted 17-07-2002 10:19 PM

seems to be coming along really well. can't add much more than what Bomu said, tho i think i remember you saying somewhere that big noses were your style.

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Intergalactic_del
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posted 17-07-2002 10:32 PM

whats the story behind this pic anyway?

hey bomu what does shinku-ti...uh... you know that signature thingy mean?

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 17-07-2002 11:33 PM

oki tnx for the comments.

akatt you're right the nose is mostly my style .
I'm sorry about the canister I forgot that I had erased a part of it when I was fixing the leg.
I_del uhm well technical it is just something to practice but the story/message of it will be in the final piece(its not in the drawing right now).

Bomu I think it is the first time that I didn't understand a sentence from you what do you mean by strech marks.

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sentient
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posted 19-07-2002 05:40 PM

well the pic is nice, although the legs look a little wierd. my problem with it is the idea behind it-is this some kinda erotic emergency type situation? "quick shes losing blood, get her some oxygen and have her put her hands down her pants", lol. yea the concept is all ive got a problem with

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Bomu
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posted 19-07-2002 07:00 PM

Heh, I'm supprised you've understood me this far! I admit to being the worlds worst speller

Let me rephrase:

Get rid of the stretch marks on her leg / trousers - where those bands are.

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tuigi
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posted 21-07-2002 04:21 PM

there should be some folds in the pants where her finger is,what ever her finger is doign in there

j/k

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 21-07-2002 09:55 PM

ah good than I did Understand you right Bomu

but it is on hold right now till the other stuff is done (rpg character, Jackel's CG).

so more suggestions are still wellcome.

For the concept it has nothing to do with injury fetish or stuff like that.
she just enjoy's the stuff in the tank and has a good time.

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 27-07-2002 08:08 PM

ok just thought I put the pencil version up that I will finaly Ink (had to scan it anyway).

now its final

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Bomu
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posted 28-07-2002 10:18 AM

Yeah, It's looking good. Is it gonna be digitally inked then? What do you ink 'em with? PhotoShop, illustrator, Steamline? Outta curiousity

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AKATT
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posted 28-07-2002 03:47 PM

looking good, i'll be waiting for the final cg. don't no how anyone can use illustartor tho - ican't get my head round it.

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 30-07-2002 11:30 PM

hehe na I'm not gonna Ink it digital, but I normaly print the final pencils onto a sheet of photo glossy paper (it doesnt suck the ink in).
And than ink it normal(which I did today).

Lately I run into some drawbacks of this technic tho, so I plan on building a nice little light box.

yeah vector grafix can be quite tricky and actully what PSP provides me with, in terms of vector, is enough for me.

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