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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 28-08-2002 08:32 PM

http://www.webphotos.com/view_photo.asp?mi=1&smi=1&a=65995&p=1800368

it turned out rather well, but I am not sure if I want to Cg it or not, I am thinking of more traditional media, colored pencils, jusry is still out tho

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the metalman
Grand Member

Member # 42

posted 28-08-2002 11:12 PM

hmm the way u drew him makes it seem as if hes older....so i dont know wht to suggest.. ;/

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tuigi
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Member # 51

posted 29-08-2002 12:05 AM

make him smaller and larger that would help make him look like a kid a bigger head too.

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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 29-08-2002 08:56 AM

ya it should have said under the image discrip at my webphotos hosting site that I tried to make it look as if Goten and Trunks were about teenage Gohans age when this particular fusion happened, also another discrepency, I listed him as SSJ3, which cannot really be true considering his hair is normal length

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 02-09-2002 01:47 AM

I hope that you dont mind if I have to say that I didnt understood 90% of your last post

Ok to the drawing overall a nice pic but I see one major error, his right arm (characters side) is not connected with his body.
I think it needs to be moved nearly half a face to the right (viewers side).

For the coloring,
well its your choice.
Personaly I think that, colored pencil can produce great stuff.but normaly they doesnt go that well with inked outlines, unless they are drawn afterwards with a very thin nibpen.
But thats just my opinion.

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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 02-09-2002 09:51 AM

well last post, hmm how to cleart this up,

click on the pic, and it will take you to the pic on my webphotos host

there look under the pic, theres the description

look above the pic theres the title,

apperently there was some confusion that I made him older then he should be, but I did this on purpose, and I thought my description on the webphotos site made that clear.

as for his arm being disconected, well to each his own I guess, I just don't see it but hey thanks for the crit anyway.

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 03-09-2002 07:47 PM

hehe understood I guess I was just a bit tired back than.

For the arm I made a quick edit of your post, to show what I mean (hope you dont mind, if you do say so and I never do it again).

What I tried to say last time(sorry it was really late) was that, his torso is rotated so that we see it partly from the side.
his left arm (viewers side) has to move with it and is overlapping the torso a bit.

In your original drawing it seemed like the arm was hanging on the side, like it is in a full frontal view.

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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 03-09-2002 09:10 PM

duuuude that is soooo cool howd you move his arm, o btw now I understand wha you meant abou the arm

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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 03-09-2002 10:11 PM

*ignore last post that was an ignorant question*
http://www.webphotos.com/view_photo.asp?mi=1&smi=1&a=65995&p=1821654

ok I moved his arm to connect with the body (forgive the image it's in mid CG, (I am also doing another version in colored pencil))
look betta now?

[ 03-09-2002: Message edited by: flashdragoon ]

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 05-09-2002 09:42 AM

yup tumbs up now it looks better.

another thing tho it looks like you have white pixels between lineart and colors.
Do you have the layers on a seperate layer?

in case havent.

You have to double click on the background layer (where your lines are on) and change the blendmode to multiply.
Than create a new layer under it.
Place your color there this way everything that is white on the lineart layer will be transparent.

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flashdragoon
Grand Member

Member # 81

posted 05-09-2002 08:51 PM

well umm thanks for the instructions, if I understood them well I would implement them, but uhhh it doesnt matter my monitor went kaputz, and I only have that prog for 5 more days, and the money I do have is going to my mothers new car oh whoa is me lol but I am rather pissed off about the monitor thing I was doing good on that pic.

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 06-09-2002 11:49 PM

Wau that sucks (but how do you view this side now :confused

, but hey I hope you still give it badass colors with pencils then.

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Random_Task
Grand Member

Member # 30

posted 07-09-2002 12:21 AM

next time draw the picture on a larger scale because then you can get more detail in and not have to worry about certain lines being too dominant that you didn't want. check out some of *thinks* bomu's and dragonfly's linearts...they are the kings of linework...well on this forum anyway

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flashdragoon
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Member # 81

posted 09-09-2002 08:23 PM

haha im posting messeges on this board from my school comp, but unfortunatly theres no dling allowed on these comps so I cant dl that prog and finish it here.

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