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tuigi
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posted 11-09-2002 11:34 AM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
it s been a while since i posted anything here, there s a fan art of e-may a character by a guy who callls himself eva-x
------> http://www.geocities.com/tuigi42/e-may.jpg

C&C is appreaciated

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AKATT
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posted 11-09-2002 03:01 PM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
okay here's the c

you seem to have drawn her right arm (ep the hand) as if it were the left arm - the thumb is on the wrong side of the hand. The arms also seem a little short.

and here the c

like the design you've got. her top is pretty cool.

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tuigi
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posted 11-09-2002 05:43 PM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
oops i see what you mean

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 13-09-2002 10:23 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Another thing is,
It seems like you have pressed to hard with your pencil.
Resulting in pencil tracks in the paper. Start out with lighter strokes and darken them afterwards (when they are to your liking), by overdrawing them several times and/or using a softer pencil.

btw. the hands look a bit small too.

And the arms could be slim'er.

the design itself is cool tho.

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