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Topic: Some good crits please?
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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14
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posted 13-09-2002 10:09 PM
wau great colors have drawn the first time with acryl this week myself and your stuff looks alot better than mine. How did you achived this smooth gradient?I which you posted a bigger version so I can see the single brush strokes (so I learn one or two things ). As far as critics goes I think her waist is way to thin, dont think she can support her ribcage with it . the wide ribcage gives the impression that her left shoulder is to small. and her wings should be connected at a higher point (where her breasts are hight wise). other than this it is an impressiv work. oh and you can edit or delete posts by clicking the paper and pen icon above your post. [ 13-09-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]
-------------------- Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas. Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.
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evil monkey
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posted 10-10-2002 05:04 PM
ups, I am infact undeadILAMA*king*_85sol and I still dont know how to critic someones work in a proper way.And should really practice how to write ORIGIONAL . [ 10-10-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ] [ 10-10-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]
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