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Pyro X
Grand Member

Member # 94

posted 22-09-2002 09:36 AM

hey all these are two chars in the making and well i just wanted some feedback. sorry i havent really cleaned it yet.

Vlaze

Dirk

[ 26-09-2002: Message edited by: Pyro X ]

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 22-09-2002 12:54 PM

hmmm
nice square, the red x adds a cool touch too
i can t see them sorry

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AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 22-09-2002 01:42 PM

Pyro X, i don't think WebPhotos.com allows you to show the images up. Next time you should post the link to the pics using the url code

here are the links for anyone else who wants to see:

Dirk

Vlaze

The Dirk pic looks pretty good. the design is great, especially the weapon. That is really cool. The forearms seem a bit thin but then that does look kinda like a style thing. Also i think the head is a tad small for the body.

The vlaze pic is also cool. The hair looks a bit wierd tho cos it looks more like a hat than hair. Also i think if you beefed up his legs a bit then it would look better.

these would look cooler if you coloured them in.

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Pyro X
Grand Member

Member # 94

posted 23-09-2002 08:31 AM

thx akatt

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 23-09-2002 09:31 PM

uhm first of,
both guys fall to the left.
Maybe it is just the way you scanned them, in but it kinda annoyes me a bit.

other than this AKATT has pretty much said everything.

Thought I want to stress out the head a bit.
I think the major problem with its size is his neck.
Which should be atleast 1/3 thinner then it is right now to match the size of the head.
Otherwise I think his head matches his body quite good (his shoulders might be a bit too wide ).

For the designs itself I like both of them,
Dirk(a terrible name ) a bit more than Vlaze (he somehow reminds me of rocky ).

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Pyro X
Grand Member

Member # 94

posted 23-09-2002 10:17 PM

hmm... you both have a point i do need to make the head larger, neck smaller, unbrauden the shoulders, and thickin the wrist of dirk, and legs of vlaze. thx peeps

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