Read-only archive: this forum is preserved for reference. Posting, registration, login, private messages and moderation tools are disabled.



Post New Topic  Post A Reply
My Profile | Register | Search | FAQ | Forum Home
  next oldest topic   next newest topic
»  Organic Metal   » I Made This!   » Works In Progress   » Any errors (nipples) updated

UBBFriend: Email this page to someone!    
Author Topic: Any errors (nipples) updated
G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 05-10-2002 04:45 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ok this might be not very interesting pic but it is related to the MVGC.

After a bit thinking what to dofor MVGC.
I desided to go with a simple front standing pose.
But I had quite alot of probs with it.
So I started to just draw frontals to get the proportions right.
After my 11 try I got the scetch down there. It seems like it is good now, but I'm not 100% sure and thought I post it here to see if someone finds a error or stuff he didnt like.

sorry for the wrong pic .

[ 06-10-2002: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

--------------------
Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.

Posts: 1063 | From: Germany, Giessen | Registered: Jan 2002  |  IP: Logged
tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 05-10-2002 09:10 PM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
can we actually see the pic.

--------------------
if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi
Posts: 310 | From: canada | Registered: May 2002  |  IP: Logged
AKATT
Mega Member

Member # 38

posted 06-10-2002 12:03 AM     Profile for AKATT   Email AKATT     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
generally i think the pic looks great. however i think it looks a bit small and doesn't look very human to me. in fact it looks like a blue fast forward symbol poitning upwards

--------------------
Final Fantasy
Posts: 451 | From: London, England | Registered: Apr 2002  |  IP: Logged
SongSiuHua
Grand Member

Member # 90

posted 06-10-2002 01:40 AM     Profile for SongSiuHua   Email SongSiuHua     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Awwwwwww!! Nipples??? cant see it Dang!

--------------------
Mud Buhda had told too many secrets of the Gods and was punished with painful boils all over his body. Only FireMonkey can suck out the poison!
Posts: 144 | From: Houston, Texas | Registered: Sep 2002  |  IP: Logged
SongSiuHua
Grand Member

Member # 90

posted 06-10-2002 04:26 AM     Profile for SongSiuHua   Email SongSiuHua     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
OKAY!!! Worth the wait!!! Okay the only problem I have with this now are those hatch lines on her breasts it kinda looks like hair and not anatomical definition...( uh if thats a word, but i hope ya know what i mean!)

--------------------
Mud Buhda had told too many secrets of the Gods and was punished with painful boils all over his body. Only FireMonkey can suck out the poison!
Posts: 144 | From: Houston, Texas | Registered: Sep 2002  |  IP: Logged
Bugsy
Moderator

Member # 9

posted 06-10-2002 06:16 PM     Profile for Bugsy   Author's Homepage   Email Bugsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Looks great, Giam!
Only thing I have to say is about the same as Song, the hatchlines. They could work on the inside of hte breast but not on the outside (where the arms are). At that spot they'd not just leave shadow but also a defined line ^^;
Proportionwise it looks very good

--------------------
Desert Rain
Posts: 1055 | From: Belgium | Registered: Jan 2002  |  IP: Logged
Shirai
Grand Member

Member # 40

posted 07-10-2002 12:22 AM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This is gonna be great when ye finish it! X3

Crits~
I thought her belly-button (not quite sure why its called that, cause mine is like a hole... belly-hole? XP) could be a little higher or her hips a little lower.

Also you could try to raising the center part of her collar bone, to me it looks odd... then again I'm not quite sure Xp

hehe looks like puffy nipples XB

Posts: 201 | From: UK | Registered: Apr 2002  |  IP: Logged
tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 07-10-2002 11:37 AM     Profile for tuigi   Author's Homepage   Email tuigi     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yhea the breast would stop on the edge like that.and i think the breast would go more out than this even thought they are normal size .and to shade the breast try following the bottom line and make a curve(i dotn know if that made any sense but i m in a hurry cause i m gonna go to scholl this morning)

--------------------
if you think you will fail a battle before starting it ,then you have already lost.
tuigi
Posts: 310 | From: canada | Registered: May 2002  |  IP: Logged
G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 07-10-2002 09:30 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
tnx so far.
I started the real version and I worked in some of the suggestions.

As for the hatches on the Breasts it was just a experiment, that I thought I try while I'm allready at it.
They arent planned for sofia(bigger Breasts ).

But I really appreciate the Critics on this and will keep it in mind when I play with this Idea more.


Puffy, really well I can life with that .

--------------------
Wer nicht vom Meister lernt, lernt nie etwas.

Wer nur vom Meister lernt, lernt nie genug.

Posts: 1063 | From: Germany, Giessen | Registered: Jan 2002  |  IP: Logged

All times are GMT  

Post New Topic  Post A Reply Close Topic    Move Topic    Delete Topic    Top Topic next oldest topic   next newest topic
Hop To:

Contact Us | Organic Metal Home | FAQ

Powered by Ultimate Bulletin BoardTM 6.05