PLOT (ooh scary!)
After the collapse of the world a new
order is founded to control the anarchy.
Called The sons of blood, they destroy
demons and men who follow them for good,
but all too quickly they become just like
their prey.

In a battle to take a temple thats been
sacrificing children to hell, the leader
of the sons of blood takes the head off
the temples master and is possessed by
the demon. Unknown to Jack n co. Now
the sons of blood turn on the people theyre
supposed to protect in an orgy of witch hunt
style executions and senseless bloodshed.
What is left of the human populace begins
to fragment into gangs and order is shattered.

Jack tells the leader hes through. He wants
no more part of this murderous nonsense.
He returns to his wife and hangs up his sword
for good.

That night the S O Blood descend on his house
and after a battle, execute them both. They
kill his wife before his eyes and the leader
whispers to Jack his true identity while hes
gagged.

For what seems like an eternity he floats
in limbo. absent of concious thought. The
seed of hatred within him grows, consuming
his soul in a red mist of hate. He awakes to
find himself in hell before the devil. The dark
lord tells him of the demon ravaging Earth and
destroying the balance between good/evil.
He offers him a proposition, kill the demon who
is fast becoming more powerful than Satan
and take revenge for his wife at the same time.
In return he will be free to join her in heaven.
Jack accepts and is reborn.

He becomes a shade. An undead warrior similar
to Yakumo from 3X3Eyes. Effectively hells assassins
they cannot be sensed by most demons as demons.
They look just like ordinary people. They can
regenerate limbs and wounds quickly.
They feel little pain. If a limb is severed it rots
into a pile of beetles/worms and filth. Shades bleed
a black tar-like substance which hisses like a very
mild acid on contact causing nausia and irritation
on contact with non demons. He is not invincible
however. Broken limbs are easily regenerated.
Jack carries a hellblade, a twin form sword which
morphs when a high level demon is near. These
weapons are the only thing capable of slaying demons
as wounds caused by hellblades regenerate very slowly.
This type of weapon is the only thing capable of
killing Jack also and every high demon has one.
When Jack kills a high demon he absorbs their
soul and the soul of everyone its killed. This
is how demons become stronger and Jack is
no exception.

Other ideas: (In case you werent bored enough)
The Seraphim, heavens hitmen are involved with
the big bad guy. A secret faction of angels want
to see armageddon come early and the world to
be cleansed for a new beginning.

A faction of Earth demons loyal to Satan help
Jack and fight the Sons of Blood. Its now the
ruling power on Earth and the sons are now

Email me a bit more about the setting and timeline. Tell me more about the hero you had in mind. I was thinking of a urotsuki doji style world filled with mutants earth demons (half human with no super powers) cyborgs, synthetics and humans. No scary demon rape, just a world filled with unusual people living a hard life.

Any problems with neko and animal based charas?. Not kawai or furries.

What age group is it aimed at?.

What actually destroyed civilisation? WW3?.

Any problems? ideas?

Also did a couple of Digimon fanarts. I apologise. I was young I didnt know what I was doing....heh.

Heres a short summary:
Hes in bed with his wife talking about him leaving the S.O.B. They agree to leave tomorrow for good. S.O.B. arrive in night. Gunfight at el casa hero. Lots of shotgun action. Twice the barrels twice the fun. Guy gets knife in head. Bhaal kills one guy himself for chickening out. Bhaal offers hero on to a swordfight.

Thats as far as ive got 4 now. I wont send it to you till ive got the beginning bit done too in the temple(where Bhaal seizes control of William Blake, commander of the S.O.B.