I guess it clearly shows that I've been watching Shirow's stuff lately (ghost in the shell - standalone complex to be exact).

The shape of the tank is inspired by my sony q55sl clip-on earphones.

[ 03-05-2003: Message edited by: G.i.A.m. ]

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For such, maybe you should of made that tank door hatch smaller cause I don't think it would fold in due to the perspective you drew. Also I think you should probably change the radar into a straight more detailed structure of some sort. Because it kind of looks like a remote control car. But, I could see if your going for a kind of comic style looks nice tho indeed. Also by the lens perhaps some hanging wires inside the frame where it shows inside a touch or down by the legs acting as springs or a jointed plate would be an added touch.

As for the female body the shape looks fine, but I don't agree with that back arm.. the way her arm lower arm goes down into grabbing her upper waist shouldn't be arched down a slight touch into that hip looks a bit odd in my view. The face looks good but I think you should change the smile a touch or add in lips instead of the pencil line.

Overall I say this was a great piece.

--- Like your other work as well Giam ---

For the "door hatch" well it isnt a door it is a cover that runs across the whole tank.
Wait I scan my first scetches of the tank you can see better what I mean there.

here it is

I will take your suggestion about the girl to heart aswell(dunno if I can fit lips in that face).

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I like it! She's very little in comparison with the tank thing - composition-wise I might question that slightly. Otherwise I think she's looking (anatomically) pretty good. Particularly the chest and shoulders! The only things I'm not sure about are the nose, which seems a little low (and her chin should maybe be a bit more pointy?) - and it's almost like her low nose is forcing her mouth down a bit too far as well...
and her pants! They look like they're baggy! They should ride up her arse a bit more, otherwise she looks like she's wearing granny-knickers... not sexy! ;)

Finaly came around to ink this.

And for thos who want to practice CGing here is a bigger Version

hopefully I dont need that much time to color it .

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I think the tank and girl is finished (if there arent some good points what can be improved).
So only the background needs to be done (can take some more month not feeling it at the moment).

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