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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 06-01-2003 11:03 PM

ok i made this pic and somethin seems to be weird whit the left side(your left)...can anyone help...an over-draw would be really helpful, ho and the big head is on purpose.
http://www.geocities.com/tuigi42/noname.jpg

[ 07-01-2003: Message edited by: tuigi ]

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 07-01-2003 11:06 AM

Hm, actually I cant see anything wrong with his left side.
But I just went up from bed, so I'm propably not the right to critic.

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neo
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Member # 88

posted 07-01-2003 07:24 PM

AGH! Page not available. Sorry chief.

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neo
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Member # 88

posted 07-01-2003 07:27 PM

Cut n paste....

Whats wrong with it?. Reminds me of YU GI OH. Maybe his face is a lil long but its hardly screwin up the pic. Colour it chief.

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tuigi
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Member # 51

posted 07-01-2003 09:40 PM

yhea i m gonna color it in 2 styles
screen tones an actual CG it will be great.

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tuigi
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Member # 51

posted 07-01-2003 10:36 PM

http://www.geocities.com/tuigi42/noname2.jpg

2nd version,i told you somethings were wrong...anyway i m lucky i got some help from the people at the mag, i should ink it as soon as i get my new ink pen.

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Ayzie
Grand Member

Member # 25

posted 08-01-2003 05:29 AM

Hey tuigi! the update looks much better! Since you asked for an overpaint... i thought I could attempt to help

Just some quick suggestions. When viewing a face from the side, you usually see the structure of the lips. I've tried to put that in my edit.
Also, I thought that the jawbone should be shown a bit more and that the ear be more clearly defined.

J. Dillon's tutorial on "Noses and Mouths" really helped me with this tricky view, especially the second and third sections.
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/tutorial/nosemouth.html

I hope that helped! Looking forward to the colored version.

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 13-01-2003 02:56 PM

Yeah- It's getting better Tugi. Should look cool with the screen tones and CG.

Since Ayzie pointed out the most important thing, I'll just suggest;

Give the hair more volume! You could do this by adding more spikes and making those spikes bigger. Characters typically have big hair styles to give them more style and character

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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 13-01-2003 08:01 PM

k bomu i ll try that my ink is all out so i cant ink my pics this is so frustrating

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