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kaori shima
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posted 18-01-2003 06:55 PM     Profile for kaori shima   Author's Homepage   Email kaori shima     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ive gone crazy! im attempting to make a fantasy type manga *i say manga becuase i surround myself with anime and manga, not american comics*

the character is nyne, shes not human but i needed her to be as human as possible to appeal to the viewers. she doesnt live on earth either, but calls it earth becuase that also means land

here are some character sketches for her =} i dont like them that much, maybe you can help *im going to change her face*

oversized rat!! weeee!

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Scarlet Hawk
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posted 19-01-2003 09:07 PM     Profile for Scarlet Hawk   Email Scarlet Hawk     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
First of all I'd like to say that this is very cool character design, I like it a lot ^_^ I especially like that second image -it has a sense of motion and you did a very good job on the pose.

On the first one, the only thing that bothers me a bit is that she seems like she is about to topple over. It is a common mistake in my own artwork though, and therefore I'm not sure how to help you with this one :/

Good luck with your manga ^_^!


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flashdragoon
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posted 20-01-2003 12:47 AM     Profile for flashdragoon   Author's Homepage   Email flashdragoon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
very good chara design, and I am in agreeance w/ScarletHark the second image has a phenomanal sense of movement, and I like the creature she is riding, like a mouse horse goat I like the whole thing

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MIKE B
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posted 20-01-2003 07:46 PM     Profile for MIKE B   Author's Homepage   Email MIKE B     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i like your designs though the drawing is good im not so sure about the rat. are there humans on her earth? is there a story behind her or her world? the easiest way to design a character is to know their life their background ect.

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kaori shima
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posted 20-01-2003 11:17 PM     Profile for kaori shima   Author's Homepage   Email kaori shima     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
thanks for the comments!

i actually worked on the backround/story before i started the drawings. i was originally gonna try to write a book *another goal of mine* but after talking to some book lovers/manga haters i decided to piss them off more by making another manga >=F

i am attempting to write the background before making the charaters and what not =}

oh, and no humans. its a different time, a different place!

i'll post more concept pictures/info later!

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SilentDan
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posted 22-01-2003 06:06 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Really cool designs, drop us a line when you have the manga started

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neo
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posted 22-01-2003 08:34 PM     Profile for neo   Email neo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Sorry I havent posted before now, been following the thread though. I love the movement in that horse/rat pic too.
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Bio Chaos
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posted 26-01-2003 03:12 PM     Profile for Bio Chaos   Author's Homepage   Email Bio Chaos     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Oooh! I really like it! She's very cute, and I love her eyes. Very nive indeed.
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