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G.i.A.m.
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posted 10-03-2003 07:37 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Ok I made this sketch and it turned out pretty good (for my standards).
So I want to give it the full run, but I have a hard time with the background (curse this stupid perspective stuff ).

My main problem is with the part to the right were a street is and the buildings in the back. I know that at some point the roof, of the buildings to the left( ), should be visibly, but when I draw this stuff in it seems to get disorted (same goes for the street).

Anyone got a idea what to do .

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Angelo
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posted 10-03-2003 08:01 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
My suggestion would be to either lower the vanishing point a bit, OR widen the part behind her a bit, so that the line on the left travels slightly more parallel to her (not completely, just relatively more). That way, you can show the slant of the roof, and where it begins.
Anything u don't understand (I dunno if i made it any good to understand) just ask.
Lookin 4ward to the improved drawing.

P.S. U might want to make her face a bit slimmer (just a suggestion)...

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Shirai
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posted 23-03-2003 01:41 AM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Since we're getting a first person view of the character, the horizion (vanishing point) would be rather low when doing perspective.

What you've done is a street that we are looking at from a angle above :3

I'm not sure if you're still working on this but I went an had a go on your pic trying to work out a better perspective.

But keep us updated on yer work G-man!

*edit* I just noticed a bunch of useless doodle and extra lines on the pic sorry Xp i blame my empty stomach

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Shirai
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posted 23-03-2003 01:41 AM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
doh*

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 27-03-2003 09:10 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Tnx guys now I see how it should be.
But I allready put so much time into getting the high vanishing point aproach to work, that I dont thing I gonna have the energy to redo it .

Im gonna post something as soon as I finished the pencils and Inked it.

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