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Pencil Soldier
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posted 26-03-2003 12:40 AM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
cg im workign on,i think ive given up on it. the ax is killing me. i cant get a good texture on it.

a scketch. the eyes are closed,for some reason it looks like there possesed.

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Shirai
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posted 26-03-2003 07:21 PM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
really good lines imo~ :3

About your cg; I think if you shaded and hi-lited on top of a base colour it would look better. The same would be for the axe it should look better with texture after you got it coloured.

I think Bugseh might be the one to look for on textures~ lol

I'mean there's another way of getting it looked textured and that is to draw cracks, dents and other inperfections a blade might have and to give it depth you add a little shade/hilite to the edge of the crack~ something like that Xp for reference look up Battle Chasers by Joe Mad.

Not trying to force you into a style but giving you an idea :3

Your sketch looks good~ perhaps the left arm could be a little longer, i'd say you should colour this one


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G.i.A.m.
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posted 27-03-2003 08:34 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Practical agree with Shirai.
Metal texturing is hard (cant do it myself to good), but I think dents and rust would suit his weapon pretty good.

Btw. little tip use a darker color than white as BG.

Oh and I would like to see a cleaned and colored version of the other guy aswell the scetch is really good.

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posted 28-03-2003 04:25 AM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
your wish is granted!

this is a little outdated, got more shading by the hand. c & c anybody?

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posted 28-03-2003 07:01 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool, quick service .
Looks very good overall, but the eyes looks alittle weird now (wasnt a problem in the sketch).

Darken the eyebrows so that they contrast more from the eye.
Right now it looks like they are a part of the eyes, giving the impression that his eyelids are stitched together.

Other than this I I think it came out great.

Any chance we see a colored version (in whether media it is colored).

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Pencil Soldier
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posted 02-04-2003 01:57 PM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
im pretty clueless abotu shading. need some help with it. and the texure of the sword

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posted 05-04-2003 01:13 AM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
update. texture help still desired,as well as crits.

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posted 07-04-2003 06:43 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hm swords are high reflective so show some of the surrounding colors on it (also stuff not in the image like the sky).

Otherwise it looks good sofar.
The guy needs a rather dark shadow under him. The background needs more seperation from the foreground colorwise.

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posted 16-04-2003 04:28 AM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
more update

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posted 16-04-2003 02:36 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
seems to develop rather well.
Try to follow the form of the sword more with the reflection. And remember the shadow.

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