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Ayzie
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posted 04-04-2003 08:49 AM     Profile for Ayzie   Author's Homepage   Email Ayzie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I'm had alotta trouble with this pic, and I'm still struggling with some of the major issues. The original sketch had alotta flaws in it, and I tried fixing it up, but it ended up worse I think ahha. Her hand's really messed, gotta fix that...hehe There are still alotta rough parts I need to fix up too. I'm probably gonna change the colors for the sheath and sword too, cuz they're looking pretty nasty. Any crits and suggestions would really help! Thanks guys.

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Angelo
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posted 04-04-2003 11:06 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Don't what you're on about Ayzie lol, I think it looks OK. The hands look fine, and her clothing's colour scheme is good. Just one little suggestion:
The part just below her abdomen should be indented a little - right now, it looks like there's something in her body pushing it out unnaturally.
As for the sword, if you want to change the colour scheme, my suggestion is to go for something dark for the scabbard, like dark blue or red. That way, it looks somewhat more regal.
Aside from those, this pic is looking great. Hope to see it in the Finished Works section soon.

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Ayzie
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posted 05-04-2003 04:30 AM     Profile for Ayzie   Author's Homepage   Email Ayzie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey Angelo, thanks for the feedback! I tried fixing it up with your suggestions, and I also worked on many other parts of the pic... Hopefully I'm on the right track. I replaced the old version with the updated version is at the top.

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posted 05-04-2003 01:05 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Looking good, especially that part which bulged out a bit b4 - it now looks completely natural. I like the colour scheme u used for the scabbard. Personally speaking, I can't really think of anything else that you need to do with this pic. It looks excellent, the composition is great, and your colouring rocks.

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