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Pencil Soldier
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Member # 64

posted 16-04-2003 01:12 PM

I have recenly erased the graves on the right and have changed the style of the wings. crits?

drag and drop

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 16-04-2003 02:34 PM

Overall I like it the wings look very cool.
Only problem are the graves to the right (

) they are not in the proper perspective compared with the rest of the scene (especial compared to the graves on the left).

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Pencil Soldier
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Member # 64

posted 18-04-2003 04:15 AM

quote:
have recenly erased the graves on the right

ahem

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neo
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Member # 88

posted 18-04-2003 06:41 PM

Love the wings. I can't draw wings, I'm jealous

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Pencil Soldier
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Member # 64

posted 18-04-2003 08:22 PM

updated. this is a fliped version.

updated,non flipped

which you prefer?

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 03-05-2003 12:53 AM

Good question, I like the unflipped version more but I cant justify this decision.

looks suprisingly good without the graves .

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Dekar
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Member # 122

posted 03-05-2003 04:31 AM

I'll have to go with the flipped version; I tend to look at a picture what sticks out the most. If you look at it in the flipped one you can view the wings up from behind to see what he is doing gives you a better feel from left to right I think. Since the figure is centered most will tend to view it left to right I believe. All depends on the effect you want I guess.

Cool picture Pencil Soldier.

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