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JBinc84
Grand Member

Member # 142

posted 04-06-2003 05:13 PM

Not the finished article by any stretch, just a concept sketch I took a little further with colours. Theres a BW version here which I thought looked pretty nice too.

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Bio Chaos
Grand Member

Member # 85

posted 04-06-2003 06:25 PM

OH OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! ALICE! CWAP! When is this due? I MUST do an Alice. I Must! Alice is so awesome she's my favorite heroine of all tome so cool awesome sweetness!

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JBinc84
Grand Member

Member # 142

posted 04-06-2003 07:24 PM

It's for the 20th Bio! Where you been? I gotta enter, cos I was the one who made a post about having Alice in the MVGC in the first place!
Alice fanart or A-level revision... Alice or A-levels, Alice or A-levels....

Yeah, Alice it is. After all, I can retake A-levels! Hahaha! MWAHAHAHAHA!
ah..... it's not that funny.

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 04-06-2003 07:34 PM

My suggestions:
Unless you're going for an interesting Mosaic style, clean up the lines.
The eyes look a little out of line. Try and bring the left eye down a little bit so that the bottom lines of both line up diagonally.
The mouth looks a little weird, because the two outer curves make it too long. Try getting rid of those, or shortening them, and integrating them into a more curve-like form, right now they look too jagged.
Lengthen the eyebrows a little bit too.
Sorry if all this advice sounds a little bossy or instructive, I don't mean it in that tone (I'm paranoid about the tone I write things in, too much English literature...)
This has a lot of potential, and the composition looks good so far. What I mentioned were minor technical points. Lookin 4ward to progress on this.

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JBinc84
Grand Member

Member # 142

posted 04-06-2003 08:51 PM

This one's just a little concept sketch - I'll redo the whole picture at some point. Don't worry about your talking tone.

And remember, bonus points in the exam if you add doodles in the margins!

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