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Pencil Soldier
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posted 16-07-2003 07:29 AM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
First off we have two chrecter sketches. These are my charecters on This RP Message Board. Its a really great board if you like to write sci-fi btw.



This guys suposed to be teenageish,hope it worked.

also related to the same board...

That one is blown up a bit, hence the messyness.


I think the main things i need to work on right now are folds, anatomy, faces and hands. Hopefuly you guys can help me. Any and all comments are extremly appreciated! Very much, as in alot. So bring 'em on!

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Pixie Nim
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posted 23-07-2003 11:44 PM     Profile for Pixie Nim   Author's Homepage   Email Pixie Nim     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey pencil soldier! woo! XD

yeah, I really like this stuff! It looks as if your work is really beginning to come together! You've really improved since you joined this board, no end. =)

the only comment I want to make is that both the sketches of guys - though I love the style of their faces an all - they both seem a little short to me? their bodies and legs are VERY short compared to their heads. You problee wanna aim for 8/9 heads high (in total) and up to 13 heads if you want a really tall guy. these guys look kinda dwarfish.

otherwise, love it, man! XD good work! and keep on with the working! it's definately helping - from these sketches I can see how much effort you're putting in, so, Much Kudos to you!!! XD

I particularly like the face on the second guy - it's got that quality, ya know? the eyes, especially... really like them. it's a good style for you. something you should maybe adopt. I likes a lot.

x_x

[ 23-07-2003: Message edited by: Pixie Nim ]

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Angelo
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posted 24-07-2003 11:02 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nice sketches, like the way u drew the faces, I like the stylistic thing going on here. One thing about the second pic - the eyes on the close-up look a little out of line with each other, but a minor mistake IMO still a good drawing. Just clean them up a little bit (hehe ok I know I'm one to talk Southern, seeing as I don't clean up mine half the time lol).

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Pencil Soldier
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posted 26-07-2003 05:18 PM     Profile for Pencil Soldier   Email Pencil Soldier     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Um..pixie...avergae male is 6-7 heads tall...and Torq is a teenager.

Thanks for the crits though.

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