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tuigi
Mega Member

Member # 51

posted 01-08-2003 06:56 PM

i m doing this picture for a pic exange so i want it too look perfect...i was wondering if any of you could provide help to help me make it look better such has anatomy pointers etc...
thank you very much http://tuigi.free.fr/hmisty.jpg

*Remember to say if your pic shows any private parts so no one gets offended. Cheers*

[ 19-08-2003: Message edited by: Bomu ]

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xantilakerworldx
Junior Member

Member # 158

posted 03-08-2003 05:58 AM

ummm it kinda looks like her stomachs full of jello to tell ya the truth and I really would like to see a mouth on her espicially in this kinda pose I think its a must its pretty good just needs a lil fixing up but pretty good job

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G.i.A.m.
Moderator

Member # 14

posted 14-08-2003 06:04 PM

I might be a little late but lets see.

First of her head is not positioned right on the neck (move the head a bit more to the left).
Also the hands need some work.

For the pose in general you picked a rather complicated one.
So I would suggest you look around for some reference images, find pictures of woman in a similar pose and use this as a guide for your own image.

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