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JBinc84
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posted 01-11-2003 10:48 PM     Profile for JBinc84   Author's Homepage   Email JBinc84     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Quick doodle and CG.

female gunner

male rogue
just noticed his arm is screwy. Its kinda meant to be behind him but I didn't shade it properly. Ah well!

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Shirai
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posted 04-11-2003 02:03 AM     Profile for Shirai   Email Shirai     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
lol nice stuff

could go easy on the outlines and give them a little shape like thick in some areas and thin in others~

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JBinc84
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posted 04-11-2003 05:44 PM     Profile for JBinc84   Author's Homepage   Email JBinc84     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yeah... the original pics are about 2 inches high... so the ink outline probably looks a little excessive

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 05-11-2003 01:21 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Oki first pointing out thinks to improve.
somehow both figures seem to fall to the right ( ).
A nice trick to avoid something like this is to flip the image when you think you are finished (mistakes will be more visible this way).

Also I would give them some nice shading to give 'em more deep even if its just a quick CG.

But from that apart very cute, good job.

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JBinc84
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posted 05-11-2003 09:05 PM     Profile for JBinc84   Author's Homepage   Email JBinc84     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
cool, thanks for that G.

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