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JBinc84
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Member # 142

posted 20-11-2003 11:28 PM

OK well on what Bomu's said in the previous topic I'm gonna colour this without inking it... before I start, does anyone have any crits or anything? I think the head might be too small, but I can't be arsed to redraw the whole thing again now for that...

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JBinc84
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Member # 142

posted 20-11-2003 11:28 PM

Oh and aren't I a clever arsehole I forgot the picture...

and yes I know the pose is ripped off of the recently revealed image of Ashe, the female lead for FFXII... that's kinda intentional.

[ 20-11-2003: Message edited by: JBinc84 ]

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 21-11-2003 02:17 AM

I think the head's alright, since it looks like the figure is in perspective, with the feet being closest to us and foreshortened. My only nit-pick will be to sugest you mouth the mouth up the face a little more. I'll look forward to see how you tackle colouring the pencil work

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 21-11-2003 05:41 AM

Bomu pretty much said everything, very cool should rock in colors.

(maybe the hand in front could use a bit more polishing).

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JBinc84
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Member # 142

posted 21-11-2003 11:05 AM

you know, its really weird, I had a dream this morning that I checked the board and everyone had just spammed this thread with negative comments like 'this sucks!!!!!!111' etc. It was really weird. Anyway, I'll fix the mouth up and get to work!

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 21-11-2003 08:35 PM

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Originally posted by JBinc84:
you know, its really weird, I had a dream this morning that I checked the board and everyone had just spammed this thread with negative comments like 'this sucks!!!!!!111' etc. It was really weird.

I thought I had that dream too after posting a piece of work at PolyKarbon- turns out it wasn't a dream I'll be sure to not post my work there again.

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hayato
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Member # 180

posted 27-11-2003 05:26 PM

yah bomu i saw that and i think that ghostface and Joe were the exact same guy! but umm.... generally for an image like that you wanna post it as a link not a tag...

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