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Zankouken
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posted 24-02-2004 10:57 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey all this is a character that I'm drawing inspired by playing Wild Arms 3 and watching Beserk, although its hard to tell atm.
Any crits would be helpful and gratefully received as I was hoping to sort out his muscles/anatomy before dressing him properly.

Here is the drawing!

Update #01 Dressed up a bit more.

Update #02 Inked and started colouring.

[ 28-02-2004: Message edited by: Zankouken ]

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Tri_kento
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posted 24-02-2004 11:43 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well from wat i see it all looks great if i were to change anything i would do the hair a bite longer the rest is perfect to me.Great Work *thumbs up*^_^!

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G.i.A.m.
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posted 25-02-2004 12:28 AM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
looks pretty solid,
but he is missing an ass ;D.

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Tri_kento
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posted 25-02-2004 01:12 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
How can u tell like i could see if the guy was and overwheight sumo they kinda have some extra baggage but this guy is super built how can u tell ?

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Zankouken
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posted 26-02-2004 03:15 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks Tri_kento and G.i.A.m for the crits. I've updated the pic and added some more things to it, hopfully I have sorted the problems you both saw with it (personaly i think it looks better with longer hair and an ass =D). Thanks again for your help.

Update #01
http://www.zank.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/rudder8.jpg

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Yuki H.
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posted 26-02-2004 11:56 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
better than what i can do. with drawing males. cool pic you must have put effort into it. Ok alot of effort!

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Zankouken
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posted 28-02-2004 08:17 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks Yuki H,
I have taken my time on this drawing, as far as effort goes i've never had paper become so grubby in a long while (from rubbing out and changing parts).
Here is my next update I have inked and started to colour it.

Update #02

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Yuki H.
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posted 28-02-2004 11:04 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
no problem!!!!

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Tri_kento
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posted 29-02-2004 03:21 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
What did u do to color you pic Photoshop?Painyshop?

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Zankouken
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posted 01-03-2004 06:32 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Tri_kento I used Paintshop Pro 7 to colour this drawing but I did the lines in pen before scanning it.

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posted 01-03-2004 10:13 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
a i c mmm thats about all i have to say about pic very good I give this drawing a 8.5/10 rating on the kento scale(if anything the hair would look cool if it down past the ears and not blowing so much but that is just my opinion it is still a very very very very very very very very ver good drawing

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Yuki H.
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posted 02-03-2004 02:44 AM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Tri_kento:
a i c mmm thats about all i have to say about pic very good I give this drawing a 8.5/10 rating on the kento scale(if anything the hair would look cool if it down past the ears and not blowing so much but that is just my opinion it is still a very very very very very very very very ver good drawing
I was thinking the same thing on my scale it is also 8.5. If i were my ex-friend she would probably give you something low it's not like she can draw as good as you and everyone else at organicmetal

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posted 02-03-2004 03:52 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
u should consider your self lucky i would like to have few more friends that were of the other sex but u know if u talk to one or make a joke in my school Everyone in the hallway has to stop and run to u and glare i your face for the rest of the day(N/J). It really pisses me off >_< !!!! ^_^! once agian my anger got the best of me well i gtg talk later.

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Yuki H.
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posted 02-03-2004 06:19 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yeah people treat me a little bit like that i cant speah to the girls in my school b-cause they have many issues and act like children and the boys act like six- year olds actually six-year olds are more mature besides i stopped being friends with my ex-friend b-cause her mother and her had alot of problems with me but not with the other friends she had ever since she went to a different school than mine both her and her mother then started 2 treat me like i was inferior.they r weird people

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masterchief
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posted 02-03-2004 10:50 PM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I hear ya Yuki H. I would get no response if I even tried to talk to a girl.

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Tri_kento
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posted 02-03-2004 11:07 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Y are u fat,ugly zit face?(not try to insult so u guys don't have to fling sloppy joes at me)

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posted 03-03-2004 01:04 AM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
No but to them i'm a dork I dont know why!Tri_Kento nobody's goin to fling sloppy joes at ya

Hehehe!
Do da doo ta do.

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Yuki H.
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posted 03-03-2004 02:15 AM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
you know even tho i'm a girl i still think their weird sometimes i think i was supposed 2 b born as a boy (i'm a boy at heart a little, sometimes, ok most of the time.) i lived with boys all my life even now! da boys always pick on me at school b-cause of my height i'm short i'm a premature child the fun part is when i beat them up(hehehe i like doin that)

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posted 03-03-2004 03:05 AM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Yuki you're a girl?Whoa I wouldn't have guessed. How old are you do you live in texas?Are you hot? Cause i'm 13 Do they cry?

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Yuki H.
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posted 03-03-2004 08:10 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by masterchief:
Yuki you're a girl?Whoa I wouldn't have guessed. How old are you do you live in texas?Are you hot? Cause i'm 13 Do they cry?
hehehe look at your face wow never saw a boy lookin' like that b4 i need 2 get my cammera! say cheese! rotf!!
(i guess u got your wish)

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Yuki H.
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posted 03-03-2004 08:20 PM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i am 12 sad right? and no i don't live in texas but went there b4 i live in n.y. and i am the smartest 1 in da class(i don't know about da cryn'your talkn' about)let me take another pic 4 da folks at home say cheese!
flash! flash! flash!

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posted 03-03-2004 10:24 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
alright... ok... yup mmmmMMMM ok no no i can't nvm

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posted 03-03-2004 10:40 PM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
YUki H. just one symbol ? Wat flash ,flash ,flash?

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Yuki H.
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posted 04-03-2004 05:25 AM     Profile for Yuki H.   Author's Homepage   Email Yuki H.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Tri_kento:
alright... ok... yup mmmmMMMM ok no no i can't nvm

know u really want 2 say somethin'

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posted 04-03-2004 11:55 PM     Profile for masterchief   Email masterchief     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Yuki H. answer me.

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