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Burning Fire
Newbie

Member # 220

posted 15-04-2004 12:35 AM

Well I guess I will say hi to everyone first since this is my first post here I gave up lurking

Ok so yeah this is a drawing http://atlas.walagata.com/w/whiteblaze/ffighter.jpg (hmmm I need to resize it) I have been working on but it feels like a couple of things are wrong but I cant tell since this is the first girl I have ever drawn. It didn't scan very well whatever oh and I haven't finalized what she is wearing yet so that's kind of a mess :P C&Cs please

Thanks!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 15-04-2004 02:36 AM

mmm on the kento scale this will get a 5.519 out of 10.

[things that don't look right ]
T.T.D.L.R:
a her lip is kinda oddly drawen (is this spos to be new kinda design ?)or is this an open mouth?
Her right leg looks bent only the back cafe is bent not the whole leg look in magazines to see how legs look at difrent angels.
she dosen't seem to have a rib cage ?_?
thats about it for things that don't look right. o and erase a little better smudges seem to over whelm the drawing !! :P

well beside the that i must give thumbs up for the very nice sholders and hands very well done the weapons are also very well done.the hair could use for a little volume tho.

over all decent pic i give ya thumbs up for first post 2 i was really nerves when i posted my first pic once school stars tho i will be posting like 5 pics can't wait !

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Burning Fire
Newbie

Member # 220

posted 15-04-2004 02:47 AM

Thanks for the help I missed the rib cage 0_o and yeah um I'm not finished with the mouth its just a quick line to get an idea of where its going....the whole things is still very sketchy I'm just trying to identify major problems

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Venom_#1
Junior Member

Member # 214

posted 15-04-2004 07:35 PM

Yeah, the thingy in her hand was strange to me, but if you are going to fix it, it would be a nice pic!

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 16-04-2004 12:56 AM

quote:
Originally posted by Venom_#1:
Yeah, the thingy in her hand was strange to me, but if you are going to fix it, it would be a nice pic!

not really if u have ever really taken teh time to learn about weapons u would know what thoses are.(this is going to sound gay since i forgot the name of them but they have the same things in Blood Rane for Xbox can't remember the name :P) i'll do some data mining at find it if i have free time.

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Venom_#1
Junior Member

Member # 214

posted 16-04-2004 06:11 PM

Oh, no!! If you ask me about weapons or arms, I am a real specialist, but maybe I wasn't looking at it so precisely... well, it aren't "Tshackoes" anyway... damn! it's name is just out of my memory... but it could be that the name is rather gay... lol

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 16-04-2004 07:13 PM

or they could be like the weapons the one girl uses in SC2 ?_? i know i have the name for them i just can't REMEMBER!!!