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Angelo
Extreme Member
Member # 134
posted 10-06-2004 02:30 PM
Hey that's pretty impressive lineart, just one thing. The edge of her face seems a little pointy, if you soften it (ie curve it a bit more), then it'll look better. Plan to CG this?
posted 10-06-2004 04:46 PM
ok I will fix it. I am gonna CG it but my brother's computer is not working today. I think he is angry at me because he must have thought I did it.
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Tri_kento
Super Member
Member # 194
posted 10-06-2004 06:58 PM
good job and i have bomu's book as well and i can see the position it also looks like u used the same boot design as well. mmm i don't feel like it but , i spos i will.
on the kento scale you get 6.834 outa 10
good job
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posted 11-06-2004 07:43 AM
Nice Yuki. My only crit would be her left shoulder. At that angle I dont think you would be able to see anything but the back of the shoulder pad/armour where as in the pic you can see into it like the right shoulder pad/armour
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