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rising_phoenix
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posted 03-08-2004 05:52 AM     Profile for rising_phoenix   Email rising_phoenix     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey everybody, it's been a long time since I posted stuff. The last 2 years have been a trial and I really had a hard time focusing on my art....looking back these past two years made me realize how passionate I am about art and the importance of it in my life. Thanks to all my friends who kept pushing me to draw and not give up....anywayz enough of sermonizing....heres the picture....it's of one of the characters in a story I've started woking on any crits or comments are geratly welcome and appreciated....cheers

Raven



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Si13Nt
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posted 03-08-2004 07:17 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
good arse!
the mouth looks a big massive on her tho
interesting gun hehe
i think her arm holding the gun looks too skinny too
but its a good pic i like the character

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rising_phoenix
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posted 04-08-2004 04:12 AM     Profile for rising_phoenix   Email rising_phoenix     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hi Silent thanx for the crits and comments....I agree with you on the lips....got a little bit carried away there I guess and yeah the arm might be a tad bit skinny...the gun is my modified version of the BushMaster M17S BullPup. Does anyone have any suggestions for the background....I had something industrial in mind but I haven't placed my finger on anything concrete yet. Oh well back to the drawing board...

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Dagan
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posted 12-11-2004 04:24 AM     Profile for Dagan   Email Dagan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I did not even notice a problem with her arms, So I guess that it is really just a matter of taste. I make vey skinny arms on my girls as well. I would show you, but i have no idea how to post pics here.
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Tri_kento
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posted 12-11-2004 03:57 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I think u can leave the size of here arms it dosen't seem to unrealistic. 4 a BG I would say it would look really neat with like a flag in the background on fire and then if u cg it u could have tons of shadings and tones.

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Losterin Galanodel
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posted 03-12-2004 02:51 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Wow, that's one big gun... and personally, I think that the lips are way too big. And the arms are a little too small. Other than that, good job!
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SilentDan
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posted 05-12-2004 07:27 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Like the pic alot bud, great to see it coloured, I especially like the thing in the background, I can imagine it look cool all cg'ed and stuff!

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