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Bomu
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posted 19-08-2004 02:59 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This is an original design based on the Game "Rival Schools" for a Capcom art contest on a new-ish forum called DrawStick. The entries so far are great, so there's little chance of me winning, but I hope at least maybe a few people will like the design

I wanted to create a character who can kick some butt and someone we can all relate to- the Artist!
This guy has a lot of frustrations in life and vents his feelings though his art and fighting (of course!)- using a variety of media to get the job done.

I plan on creating a mural or some sort of design to cover the back of his uniform. Before I progress, I'd like to hear your thoughts. Cheers.


Front- to illustrate full chara

Back, to illustrate uniform "mural"

'Character select' style pose

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posted 19-08-2004 11:46 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Like the character concept, sounds like someone we could easily relate to (especially when it comes to high school). Only thing I'll say is his hair seems a bit too exaggerated, maybe you could shorten it a tad. Aside from that, he looks really cool. Let's see him kicking some dumb jock's ass back to hell!

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posted 19-08-2004 04:43 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
He looks very cool, great designs. What sort of colour scheme you got in mind Ben?

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posted 19-08-2004 04:45 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I disagree about the hair angelo, you want some features to be exagerated or you might as well take a photograph of someone, I like the hair!

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posted 19-08-2004 10:46 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
looking good Bomu,
but I hope he is leaning against a wall in the first picture otherwise he is off-balance.

Personaly I would drop the net-shirt,
and change those biker/fighting gloves to those nice white cotton gloves that prevend pencil and ink smudges .

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posted 19-08-2004 11:46 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks for the comments guys.

Angelo- I'll probably keep the hair. I agree, he might look better and more "real" if it was shorter, but I've been drawing too many short haired mails and feel like a change plus exagerating hair styles is something typical of the game and I want it to tie in as much as possible. But yeah, It'd be cool to see a pic of him kicking the crap outta the school bully for trashing his art project! Anyone else wanna draw that one?

SilentDan. Still undecided on colours I original thought traditional dark grey or black for the uniform, but maybe with a hint or purple? And maybe some ink stains up the sleeves providing they look ok

G.i.A.m- I'll try to sort out the balance issue. The toes on his right foot are supposed to be off of the ground slightly, so a little shadow underneath will hopefully illustrate this and maybe he could do with a sligh rotation to the left.. I like the white cotton gloves idea! Altho his opponent's blood stains might ruin them after a battle or two!

Any suggestions for what I could draw on the back of his jacket? I thought perhaps a tattoo style oriental dragon to tie in with the Japanese theme, but anything would go.

Thanks again

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posted 20-08-2004 12:32 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Jacket tattoo - What about a dragon winding around a pencil?
Hair - yeah, it's no big deal, just a suggestion.

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posted 22-08-2004 10:07 PM     Profile for G.i.A.m.   Email G.i.A.m.     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Bloodstains can easly be removed by handwashing the stains with normal shampoo in coldwater (hot water would only make it harder to remove) .

apart from this I like angelos idea

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posted 29-08-2004 03:25 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well some one tried to COPY u...

here
http://drawstick.proboards32.com/index.cgi?board=finished&action=display&num=1093703598

thought u should know *snap finger thumb up *

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posted 29-08-2004 01:19 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cool character Bomu,
I think you should stick with the gloves he has though. Also thats some of the best footwear I've ever seen on a fighting game character.
I know this may be a bit off topic but I watched an old kung-fu movie the other day where the last boss used caligraphy to fight (he wrote on bits of paper then they flew off and shot the good guys) The last boss decided his was the "Ultimate Style" of kung-fu so maybe your on a winner there with your artist idea.

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posted 29-08-2004 06:39 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Also i didn't mean to make it sound like i was having a shit just that i thought some people would be intrested in seeing it thats all(not saying anyone was being bitchy towards me just thought i would add this tader tout in :P)

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posted 31-08-2004 04:43 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks for the comments.
Tri- Very similar indeed. It does make me wonder if people have seen my design and used it to base thiers on, or it's probably coincidence.. This one, posted shortly after I posted mine is uncanny: http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs4.deviantart.com/i/2004/243/8/9/YoshiyukiSakai.jpg
Although I'm pretty sure it wasn't a deliberate rip, as the artist responcible seemed very guilty after noticing my character and has appologized for any similarities.

Zankouken- sounds really interesting! Do you remember the name of the movie? I was considering "Penny Crayon" style moves whereby he'll draw something and it comes to life, but it's perhaps a little over the top for this game!

I wont have time to fully render the character pics before deadline, but I have worked on these more and here's the result:

His name: Sosuke Yong Kim


Front view


Jacket art


Character Select

His stats & Story:

Sex: Male
Home life: Living with his Japanese mother. His Korean father works over seas.
Likes: Reading manga, being creative, RPGs.
Dislikes: People watching him, Girly things.
Special talents: Making things, fixing broken things.
School: Recent Transfer to Gedo HS.
Subjects good at: Art and any that make use of computers.
Subjects bad at: Japanese, Mathematics, English.
Part-time job: Draws and sells caricatures in the mall after school instead of doing homework.

Spending many hours working on his artwork and original comic book stories, Sosuke has become a real perfectionist. He takes criticism very badly- and this can provoke his violent streak! Daigo noticed his strong fighting spirit during an “art criticism incident” and asked him to join his gang. Edge is jealous of Sosuke as Edge takes great pride in his “Gedo gang patrol teams” logo designs but thinks they seem worthless compared to anything Sosuke might draw.
Although polite and friendly with fellow class mates, Sosuke spends much of his time alone to concentrate on his personal projects and goals. He doesn’t engage much in social chit-chat although he realises this is giving the girls the impression he’s not interested, despite having a secret crush on Akira. He regrets his attitude most when he sees her helping Gan with homework instead of him!
As with other artists, Sosuke has a keen eye for detail and can quickly pick up and mimic movies he has seen performed by others. He is able to launch projectile attacks in the form of various artistic media which he keeps in his pockets and school bag.

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posted 31-08-2004 06:25 PM     Profile for StuckMojo   Author's Homepage   Email StuckMojo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
that's a really creative and interesting character Bomu... Nice job

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HEY!! YOU COPIED MY IDEA MAN!!!

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posted 31-08-2004 11:07 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
not funny.....


BUT THIS COLOR CHOICE IS !!! HAHA

Just kidding , I really like it CGed brings out a coller side of him. just a little disapointed I was hoping the hand logo on his bag would be orange but neh your work not mine.

GOOD ONE *thumbs up*

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posted 01-09-2004 12:05 AM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Niceage, amigo-san.

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Dude, nicley done with the dragon. Really like the fire thing u got going with that too (hehe, of course, it sounds like i'm bound to say that, since i kinda mentioned the idea, but hey, anyone's free to say Angelo's idea is shit etc etc, not like i'll care). I think the colour choice is good, makes him a bit 'arty' and mysterious. I also like the background u've got going about him, the love interest thing sounds pretty cool.

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posted 01-09-2004 09:56 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Angelo's idea is shit etc ETC!!!

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Yeah the colour scheme and the pencil dragon on his back both rock.
I have some move ideas, the obvious one being blinding his opponent with indian ink! For another one Sosuke could draw breath taking pictures and leave them lying on the ground where he stands, then when the enemy draws near they become distracted by the picture and left open for attack (so essentially they are traps).
As for the kung fu movie sorry m8 I missed the begining and never thought to find out the name.

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posted 02-09-2004 01:41 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks again for the follow up comments. The contest's now over and to be honest, I have practically no chance of winning! - It was easily the biggest art contest I've ever seen and there were hundreds of fantastic entries, which would be worth checking out alone for the art. I'd say probably 80% of the entries were equal to or better than mine- technically/skill-wise. But at the end of the day, it motivated me to draw something, which I still consider decent. When I come to colour the pics properly, I may decide to edit some of the colours, so this isn't necessarily the final colour combo.

Si13Nt- hope you're joking

Zankouken- cool moves ideas! Woulda been cool to draw some for the contest if I wasn't so turtle-like!

cheers

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posted 02-09-2004 01:51 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
me? joking? hehehe
yes yes ok you got me
dont think ive said anything serious on this thread yet
its really cool pic, like the dragon pencil

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posted 02-09-2004 04:47 PM     Profile for Zankouken   Author's Homepage   Email Zankouken     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well you know what they say
- Patience is a turtle -
I checked out the pictures and there were some good ideas there! Kind of makes me wish I had bought Rival Schools or Project Justice when I had the chance.
I think it would be fun if we had a competition here and gave it a nice, long entery period.

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Patience is a turtle? isnt it, turtles are a virtue?

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posted 03-09-2004 04:45 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hmm, i always thought it patience was a virtue... nah, forget it, i'm completely off. Really.

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neh, virtues are for turtles anyway

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