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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 27-08-2004 12:53 AM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10116758/

Just a basic sketch of Tifa doing a roundhouse kick in her Advent Children costume. I know it looks boring bcos of no speedlines, I will try to add those later. For now, I just want to know what issues to resolve, before going on and inking it. Thanks all!

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masterchief
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Member # 205

posted 27-08-2004 01:12 AM

dude its not comin up.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 27-08-2004 03:06 AM

aaa for the record am not one to talk about these things seeing as most of the time i don't care all that much but it's kinda eating me so here it goes. her breast are kinda to low i would think about lifting them a little. but beside that this seems to be better then your past submits

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<Erock>
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posted 27-08-2004 08:06 AM

nice! Thats one big camel toe...

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 27-08-2004 02:45 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10116758/ - changed the pose and resolved a couple of issues

[ 27-08-2004: Message edited by: Angelo ]

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ColorFool
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Member # 240

posted 28-08-2004 04:05 PM

Like the pic, but I think it would be easier for me to comment if it were smaller. not too sure bout that ribbon-like thing on her right foot though, I think its the boot, but it could be revised. It mite b just me.... heh

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 28-08-2004 06:39 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/10158279/ - changed the picture yet again lol. (PS apologies for any spamming, if any).

[ 28-08-2004: Message edited by: Angelo ]

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ColorFool
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Member # 240

posted 28-08-2004 09:27 PM

lol, I can see the erasing marks :-p its like she's moving....

anyway, I like this one a lot better, but she still sorta looks like she's leaning to one side more than kicking. there are ways to fix that, again, it might just be my mind. :-) Good job so far though, if you make anymore changes, post again

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Xion
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Member # 239

posted 05-09-2004 06:49 PM

Its hard to draw a character that with many fan arts changing the way the character originaly looked, so there is no acurate 2-d perspective!

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<Tips>
Newbie

posted 18-09-2004 06:42 AM

I think it would be better if you added a little more flow to the hair and fixed the hand on the left they both look stiff. just a little constructive criticism<---cant spell

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Canadian surfer
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Member # 252

posted 11-10-2004 04:38 AM

nice drwing at first it was to big and i agree her breasts were a little to low but after you fixed those problems it looked really good nice work.

Keep it up.

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Cloud
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Member # 276

posted 18-12-2004 04:16 PM

I can barely see it it's so big! anyways, I saw enough to have several comments on it. overall piccy is good,

the hands ARE a little small, the fore leg looks like it's seperated from the body and the hair is STILL a little stiff.

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