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BombX3
Junior Member

Member # 246

posted 23-09-2004 09:17 PM

Hey all,
Well heres my second piece, and i just wanted to know if im heading in the right direction if ya all know wat i mean, same as last time improvements and critism are all welcome. Sorry for the bad pic, i dont know how well you guyz can see it, I hav to take em off the a digital camera and im a bit crappy with it

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 24-09-2004 12:35 AM

I see improvment *thumbs up* but I also see some things that could be fixed.For one , some of the folds on his shirt aren't makeing sense. Also his cloller is looking odd, It makes it kinda look like his head is bent up, and your getting a birds eye view(hope that made sense)

Well as I said I can see improvment*2 thumbs up* just keep practicing, and practicing untill your arm is sore(or in my situation shoulder is gimpped)

well good luck and keep at.

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Angelo
Extreme Member

Member # 134

posted 24-09-2004 01:23 PM

Very chibi-esque, an interesting style you got going there. The guy's arms seem a little short, perhaps you could extend them a little, so that they end up in proportion. Apart from that, this is a nice improvement. Keep it up!

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BombX3
Junior Member

Member # 246

posted 24-09-2004 04:25 PM

Cheers for both of your replys. All helps

kento: At first i didnt quite understand what you meant with the collar but i think iv grasped it now. It needs to be sort of pushed up I think cause it looks a bit flat im not quite sure but ill have a go.I can see what you mean with the wrinkles ill fix that to.

Angelo: Cheers for comments again, Ill muck around wit the arms when i sort out the wrinkles

Thanks again

PS...whats going on around here l8ly it seems a little 'dead'
and is there any other boards similar to these that you can recommend

[ 24-09-2004: Message edited by: BombX3 ]

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Si13Nt
Extreme Member

Member # 221

posted 24-09-2004 04:35 PM

lmao look! another this board is dead post :P hahahah muahauhahahaa buahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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