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Bomu
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posted 30-11-2004 11:57 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I'll be honest, I've only seen one episode of CCS and shoujo manga isn't usually my thing, but I just fancied drawing a bit of fanart with a fetishy flavour! Probably not to most people's tastes but that's art for ya.

If anyone has and comments or criticisms, I've be glad to hear 'em! .. I've nailed out a few faults already- the sceptre head was redrawn in Photoshop for example. - I'll neaten it up after I know there's nothing else major I'm missing out! I'll probably be adding a background- don't know what yet.

cheers

[ 01-12-2004: Message edited by: Bomu ]

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Tri_kento
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posted 01-12-2004 12:29 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Is there spos to be a picture cuz am not seeing one? i spos being stupid has come and kicked me in the back of the head.

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Bomu
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posted 01-12-2004 01:00 AM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
My bad!

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Angelo
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posted 01-12-2004 01:42 AM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Very VERY minor point - perhaps the heads seem a little big? Maybe I'm completely wrong. For Sakura, the left arm might benefit from the elbow joint being a bit higher, but nothing major. Seems to be OK to me.

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posted 01-12-2004 01:48 AM     Profile for SsJTrunks14   Email SsJTrunks14     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i dunt think the heads are too big i've seen the show there heads are funky shapped imo

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Tri_kento
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posted 01-12-2004 04:46 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
well i see it now

am likeing it.
my only problem is on the left arm on sakura, it seems the arm glove she has on is kinda odd, since when u look at her uper arm were the skin is and the lower where the glove is over the arm thickness dosen't seem to change and when u wear a glove most of the time it adds some width(or at least show some sign that the glove is being conected to the arm band glove top), kinda a stupid thing to point out but it really bugged me, u can ignore me if u want, it's a great picture none the less,but I find when people can comment on even the most perfect drawing the artist tries harder on the next picture and gives them some power to go past where there at.

o and i would say put a little more detail into her staff it seems to be kinda dull, even tho on the show it is kinda plain it would really look cool if u made it all high tech and computerisd, or like old tomb tribaly would look cool, i don't know.
remember just cuz it's fan art dosen't mean u have very same lol ^_^

I love it none the less i wish u posted more.

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Bomu
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posted 01-12-2004 12:31 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Cheers for the comments guys.

Angelo, I'll make Sakura's head a little smaller as it doesn't look in proportion with Tomoyo's. Head proportions is something I always seem to struggle with! Luckily these flaws are usually spotted before committing to a final version.

Tri, Thanks for the critque, as you say it's a good idea to highlight even minor flaws as it gives us something to consider for next time, if not right now. Hehe, I'd post more if I drew more! But you're right- I shall try to draw and post more often

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Angelo
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posted 01-12-2004 12:34 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
No worries, man, I always suffer from the same complaint too (although I haven't actually drawn for a while, but hey, working on a Hellsing fanart colab with someone else...watch this space)

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posted 01-12-2004 01:37 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I think the piccy looks great Ben, I esepcially like the girl on the right (my right) lil' cutey! lol I watched Card Captors a few times, I quite liked it, never saw this episode though lol

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posted 01-12-2004 02:41 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Nice work. I think the head size is fine as a stylistic thing. Looks like the one on the left stole your cybernurse's shoes

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posted 01-12-2004 04:49 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i think the only that can stop him drawing amazing pictures is cryptonite...or possibly brain damage, or cutting of his hands...or both

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Tri_kento
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posted 02-12-2004 12:58 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well u know wat they say"with a will there's a way" so who knows maby when bomu's dead and in a grave he'll haunt newspaper stands and draw all over books and junk, who knows lol

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posted 02-12-2004 07:00 AM     Profile for Dagan   Email Dagan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
You sir, are a god! Those chicks rock! I have never seen the show or what ever it was, but I like it! I would give my left arm to draw like that!
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Bomu
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posted 02-12-2004 02:30 PM     Profile for Bomu   Author's Homepage   Email Bomu     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks again for the comments guys.

Jats- Yeah, they are similar. I've got a thing for heels

Lol @ haunting news stands.

To be honest, I still have a long way to go before I think I'm worthy of such praise. You just have to look through the amateur artist's galleries on deviantart etc. to see there's a lot of talent out there that surpasses mine by miles! Although it's always good to get a positive response- it means I must be doing something right!


- I was working like a demon last night on adding the background and inking it- was up 'till gone 2 in the morning to get it finished. It's looking good, but I had several problems with the inking and ended up rushing parts of the background >_< I'll scan it in later and try to recover some of the damage caused by my impatience

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posted 17-12-2004 05:15 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i like it! I have a habit to draw thier heads bigger than the waists, and whenever I trie to make thier heads smaller or thier heads bigger, they look, well... scary

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