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Jats1
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posted 03-12-2004 05:08 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hey guys,

I recently found a really cool site called Void where really good artists fight with comic pages. You have to submit, and stick to a character (though you can make several) and they are formally incorporated into the website, with win/lose statistics, rankings and gradings, and members vote on fights. Its basically very cool. It all takes place in Void City which is semi-futuristic and corrupt. You have to submit a design sheet, a bio, a win pose, and lose pose and 2 intro pages to the admin to join in. Anyway most of the ppl are better than me but I thought Id try anyway. Heres the character Im trying to develop.

Bio: He joined an active human rights group as an idealistic youth, but was badly scarred and mutilated by the authoritarian riot police during a riot, when he was sprayed by a caustic chemical weapon. He lost an arm up to the elbow, and one side of his head was affected. One hemisphere of his brain was destroyed. His autonomous functions had to be regulated mechanically for months as doctors fought to save him, and as he lay in agony, all he could think of was revenge. Due to recent advances in nanotech, solid state computing and robotics, the doctors were able to rebuild his subconscious and replace his arm. His bloodstream was flushed with nanites that repaired damaged tissue. However his deep-seated revenge drive began to bend this technology to a new purpose. The nanites, under the control of his machine-brain, began to build muscle, harden his skin and improve his sense and physical characteristics. Later he added an anti-matter fusion generator to his inventory of implants that vastly increased the power of his robotic enhancements, as well as giving him energistic attack abilities. His eye implant allows him to see in all wavelengths of the electro-magnetic spectrum.

He spends his time using connections in the human rights organisation to get specialist equipment, and to identify targets who at some time had involvement with the government or the police forces. He then hunts them down. Occasionally he is distracted from this by events. But he will never forget....

Original Sketch

close-up face for tri , him without his faceplate on

Possible lose pose

POssibly might be part of design sheet

I did them on an aeroplane and tried to ink them properly (which I suck at at the moment) so I might do a few redraws, but I might not as Im lazy lol. I also might make him more detailed. Anyway what do you guys think?

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Dawsy
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posted 03-12-2004 11:52 PM     Profile for Dawsy   Email Dawsy     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
site seems cool, but bit down with work atm. Your character looks amazing and the ideas behind it are very deep. If I could be bothered to sign up to that id vote for it!
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Tri_kento
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posted 04-12-2004 03:35 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Don't mean to pee on ur parade, but on the close face up picture the one eye ball with all the vines looks odd, to many vains, i would also suggest making them a little smoother a bit, other then that cool drawing !

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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 04-12-2004 05:56 PM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Dylan, those weren't veins, thats the muscle under your skin, but covering your bone. If you were to tear off your skin, you'd see that, supposedly.

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Tri_kento
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posted 04-12-2004 08:12 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Tri_kento:
Don't mean to pee on ur parade, but on the close face up picture the one eye ball with all the vines looks odd, to many vains, i would also suggest making them a little smoother a bit, other then that cool drawing !

Chad maby u should read the post before u point fingers, I was talking about the "EYE BALL" the vains in the "EYE BALL" u have to read the post chad.

o and am bitchy because when me and my dad were trying to fix the car i got a shot of gas in teh face. it really burned . so i can bitch "NEH"

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Si13Nt
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posted 04-12-2004 11:56 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
LOL

you go girlfriend

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Tri_kento
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posted 05-12-2004 12:54 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
am not a girl! lol but support apreciated none the leess lol stupid car, i had like 3 showers and i still smell like gas(and yes I changed me shirt and such)

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Jats1
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posted 05-12-2004 04:21 AM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
lol its ok tri, your crit was fair do-s. I think he will,just notm remove the faceplate anyway, Im re-drawing them all better....watch this spot

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SilentDan
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posted 05-12-2004 07:34 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I agree about the eye Tri, but I still like the pics, great bold lines, striking, and great pieces for someone flying in a plane! I trust you weren't flying the plane

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<Erock>
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posted 16-12-2004 09:08 AM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
jats1 dude i'm so doing it man... there are some really good comics on that site... thank you for telling me about it or elese i would have never found it also keep up the good work i want to see your character in void yea man! mine will be there!
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Angelo
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posted 16-12-2004 11:43 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Hehe, this guy sounds cool, like a scarier and more political version of the Punisher. Only thing I'd say is:
3rd picture down, the foreshortening seems a bit odd. What you could do is to move the lower leg in the foreground to the left a little bit, that way, the foreshortening looks better.
It's all cool nonetheless, u got any others lined up?

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Jats1
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posted 17-12-2004 04:05 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I am about to finish cging my win pose, and ive pencilled two pages of intro sequentials. They came out slightly interstingly, because I can't seem to stop trying out weird perspectives. lol. Ill post things as they are completed

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<Erock>
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posted 18-12-2004 09:59 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
This is my void character i will keep drawing more pics and i'll keep on working on this void thing until i'm done, Later guys.



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Tri_kento
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posted 19-12-2004 01:27 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
mmm looks a little like dare devil .... nice going none the less.

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posted 19-12-2004 05:01 PM     Profile for Cloud   Author's Homepage   Email Cloud     Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
methinks it needs a little more thought. sorry.

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SilentDan
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posted 20-12-2004 01:24 PM     Profile for SilentDan   Author's Homepage   Email SilentDan     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
He looks almost indentical to Dare Devil

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