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Angelo
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posted 14-12-2004 05:01 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/13165651/ something i'm working on for someone from the forum on www.traum4tized.com.

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<sloppy nig>
Newbie

posted 14-12-2004 09:50 PM

Not that good, sorta gay,the hair is all slopped and the gun has no little tid bits. To be blunt.... It's sloppy nigger!

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 15-12-2004 12:29 AM

mmm i would suggest u work on the hair a little(could use a little more detail), and i spos everthing seems to look a little nicer when it's CGed , neh good work none the less.

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SilentDan
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posted 15-12-2004 01:26 AM

The pic does seem a lil' scribbly, even for a sketch, but i like the composition, Alucard > Dracula very clever hehe

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Losterin Galanodel
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posted 15-12-2004 02:36 PM

I agree too, I just don't like it, so smooth it out, or well, have lots of people on your back (3 on 1, not very nice).

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Angelo
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Member # 134

posted 15-12-2004 03:11 PM

Tri and Dan - Yeah, looking back, I noticed the hair coulda been done better, as i said, it's a WIP, so it's not finished by any means.

sloppynigga - [sarcasm] your advice was soooo useful [/sarcasm]

Losterin - see my reply to Tri and Dan. In addition, I asked for advice, not people to get all silly and on-my-back sort of thing, so see my reply to sloppynigga.

[ 15-12-2004: Message edited by: Angelo ]

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Si13Nt
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posted 15-12-2004 05:52 PM

sloppynigga - [sarcasm] your advice was soooo useful [/sarcasm]

LOL so true HAHAHA

i think the guns need a some mroe detail, look at some pictures of pistols or whatever on the internet or something, that should help there, i tihnk the picture would look real cool then, the hair yeh bit more detailed wud look real good

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Bomu
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posted 15-12-2004 06:51 PM

Losterin Galanodel aka sloppy nig. One more shitty comment and you're banned. Just doin my admin duty

Angelo- didn't know you visited Traum's site- was that how you first heard about OM? Great foreshortening on the gun.

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Si13Nt
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posted 15-12-2004 10:01 PM

Bomu- hehehe u go girlfriend!!!
(unrelated saying)

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Si13Nt
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posted 15-12-2004 10:01 PM

Bomu- hehehe u go girlfriend!!!
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Dagan
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posted 16-12-2004 12:54 AM

I did not notice the backwards spelling until dan pointed it out. As far as sketches go, I am alot the same way. I erase nothing until I ink, so you can imagine what a mess I have! lol But It looks at least to me that this pic is heading in the right direction. The perspective of the front gun is realy good. I have a feeling that the CGed version will be very impressive.
As far as the ill comments. I have something to say, but it would probably get me kicked off for expressing them. So I will just like to say that I have seen his comments, but I have yet to see one piece of artwork come from him. I for one would be very interested to see if his pencil is as sharp as his tongue.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 16-12-2004 03:16 AM

hehe sloppy nig makes me chuckle don't ban him bomu. a world with out larfs is a world i don't wanna live in

sloppy nig how blunt yet adaquit

also i have one more suggestion 4 ya angelo, i might be a good idea to do other copys of drawings to make things a little more clearer(i know it's time consuming but it really builds of skill)

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Bomu
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posted 16-12-2004 04:44 PM

True. I kept him here this long just to laugh at his foolish comments

but I'm bored with him now.

But at the end of the day, I don't want other potential members to be put-off from signing up to the forum in case they think it's full of childish hate-talk

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Organic Metal

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Cloud
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posted 16-12-2004 04:55 PM

i dunno... I think it's okay... my rating is probably a 4/10. that's pretty good. keep practising and if you have talent (well, everybody knows this) you'll be as good as bomu some day when your 99 years old and your fingers are falling off and

(the following text is NOT censored because there is no rason to) and your @#% is decaying. now let's all plig in our 50 K video cards and watch a slow mushy episode of care bares

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Angelo
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posted 20-12-2004 04:01 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/13165651/ - here it is, hair is kind of sorted out, and added more details in it. Still WIP so far.

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Erock
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posted 20-12-2004 07:15 PM

I like it... that gun looks too cool.

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Bomu
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posted 21-12-2004 10:38 PM

Hi ya.. I've edited on a few suggestions here: http://www.organicmetal.co.uk/Extra/Alucard_sketch_by_sayem.jpg

to Summarize:

Overall picture contrast level change so it's not so dirty looking

Eyebrows pointing down- shows more attitude.

Nose modified. I just think this looks better.

New Hand suggestion. You've nearly got it, but for some reason still looks a little awkward. My example ain't much better (I shoulda used reference), but it might help.

Compasses, rulers/straight edge where needed.

Anyho, just a few ideas. Take 'em or leave em, I don't mind

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Jats1
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posted 22-12-2004 05:43 PM

are you planning on inking it? if not maybe you should have a go at it with a 2b and 8b and then you can scan it lightly and get rid of all the fraff like that, and then adjust the contrast or levels or whatever. Im sure your bored of adjustments by now, but I think the eyes could look a little eviler, perhaps by making them less like horizontal ovals and more shaped with pointy bits in the corners

also Im not so sure about the bats.

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Angelo
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posted 31-12-2004 07:50 PM

http://www.deviantart.com/view/13672261/ final version, followed some of the suggestions that Ben and Jats1 gave.

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Tri_kento
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posted 31-12-2004 11:55 PM

good stuff

but if i might suggest, in the gun barrel there are little grooves, witch in a real gun they on kinda of a diagonal slanty witch makes the bullet spin thus makeing it go straight, u might wanna slant them a bit, but eh ur prefrence to detial i spos. not many people wou7ld care but i just thought i'd share.

( i should relly post some of my pics, i have like 4 waiting on my computer.)

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Angelo
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posted 01-01-2005 01:16 AM

Go for it man, let's see what you got

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Cloud
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posted 01-01-2005 04:26 AM

okay... I'm lost...

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Dawsy
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posted 22-01-2005 07:26 PM

this is a great drawing but the gun in his left hand is held rong, its too far from his palm meaning the trigger finger is made to look about twice as long as the rest lol or in this case all the finger wud b way too long in proportion to his hand.

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Stefanie
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posted 17-02-2005 03:50 AM

very nice, but I have a question, if this supposed to be aurocard from hellsing? the anime? if it is, his face doesn't seem to resemble aurocard, I can't put my finger on it, other than that, costume and gun are

excellent! I love it, maybe do what tri said, work on the hair a bit more!! GOod Job!

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Stefanie
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posted 17-02-2005 03:52 AM

oh and btw...don't listen to sloppynigga, he doens't know what hes saying, it's an excellent piece! ^.^

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