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Jats1
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Member # 183

posted 04-02-2005 05:29 PM

I am trying to improve my tablet skills, realism skills, and brush hardness adjusting skills all at once. Anyway, still alot to do, gonna refine the rendering and outline, make her few clothes complicated, do a nice background, and spend a lot of time tweaking colours. Probably about halfway there anyway. Thoughts, critiques and ideas for background all welcome

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Bomu
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Member # 1

posted 05-02-2005 12:22 AM

Overall, it's good stuff- well painted, good proportions etc. I have some minor concerns with her face- I'm trying to work out what it is exactly!- The mouth areas around her lips looks too sunken in or too flat. I'd try making that area lighter. The eyes look a little overpowering! perhaps tone down to intensity of the blue? The shape of the face seems quite triangular- this could be fixed by making the chin a tad wider, or the jaw a tad narrower.

As for BG- I'd probably just leave it white, or add in some buildings or something?

But yeah, great start, I'll look forward to seeing it finished.

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Cloud
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Member # 276

posted 05-02-2005 12:37 AM

Cool 3D what program did you use?

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Erock
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Member # 189

posted 05-02-2005 01:12 AM

I think thats super cool Jats! I do agree with Bomu about the eyes it looks like shes the terminatrix or something also nice job on the boobs. *I want to squeese*

Hey is it just me or does everyone see instead of deviantart see devian-tart? Like hes a tart or something...lol

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Jats1
Mega Member

Member # 183

posted 07-02-2005 02:04 PM

Thanks guys. Yeah bomu I agree with your suggestions, the mouth area definitely needs work. Cloud, I drew it straight in to photoshop on my tablet.

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Tri_kento
Super Member

Member # 194

posted 08-02-2005 01:17 AM

mmm u the bikini i'd suggest just give the same depth as the body and to soften the face a bit. it seems to darkened. like ur trying to show her age lol no offense(i couldn't do better so yea)Also great pic am likeing it over all!

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Cloud
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Banned as of 11/11/05

Member # 276

posted 09-02-2005 01:31 AM

Wow U drew it right with ur tablet amazing

oooh aah

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G.i.A.m.
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Member # 14

posted 09-02-2005 06:55 AM

man very nice, only critic I have is the face aswell I think the main problem are the cheeks dont make them so harsh and make them a little rounder.
also the hair looks like a solid mass maybe have some single strands running out to give it a little cloudier feel (dunno how to describe it).
For background I would suggest a beach scene, keep it simple tho.

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Danni
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Member # 294

posted 11-02-2005 12:21 AM

WOWERS! that's really good. all i have to say is tow things... i agree with you on fixing her bikini. it looks like a spot you forgot to color. and her eyes and expression make it look like she's looking at you middle and daydreaming.

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