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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 17-02-2005 01:57 PM

Okay a wolfs head let me know what you think i'll get round to colouring it once i get better at doing hair or in this case fur!

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Comments etc please

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Stefanie
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Member # 293

posted 17-02-2005 03:51 PM

the hair is awesome, very good!! and you have a good sense of use of line, but the one problem I see is with his muzzle, It need to be thicker on the top and a little thicker on the bottom, I attached this little wolf drawing for an example, hope it helps, excellent work there webb, keep it up!

(drawn by Ithica, shaded and colored by Stefanie)

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Si13Nt
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posted 17-02-2005 03:55 PM

yeah i agree it looks really good but it looks more like a wolf / mole/mouse hybrid

i think the muzzle ( is that right word? ) should be bigger and more squared like the drawing stef put up

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 17-02-2005 04:04 PM

nice drawing,Good lines

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I'd suggest putting a little more detail in the eye's and maby give the wolf some teeth ? not that u have to put huge fangs streching down to his feet, just show like little nubs were the front fangs are. well that's wat it think.

I like alot tho!

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<Losterin>
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posted 17-02-2005 08:21 PM

I agree with Kento here, it is very well done, but I also did notice that the mouth was kinda...empty. As well, maybe a glare or reflection in the eye, as with dog eyes, they are almost always brown, and it looks as if they have no iris, as lots of dogs eyes are a deep brown. My opinion though, do what you wish with it!

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Cloud
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posted 17-02-2005 09:35 PM

Agree, it needs a tounge. Is that considered anime?

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Stefanie
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Member # 293

posted 17-02-2005 10:37 PM

cloud why does it matter if it is anime or not? Just out of curiousity?

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Cloud
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posted 18-02-2005 12:16 AM

Dunno just I think it might be appropriate to post anime up on this board, considering that's the point.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 18-02-2005 01:19 AM

... Anime is japanese animated comicsA.K.A japan cartoon. Manga is japanese comics. i think this site is more in the view of anime style drawings.
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Angelo
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posted 18-02-2005 02:58 AM

Hey, I think the fur looks pretty cool in this as it is. It certainly looks great for CGing, I normally have trouble drawing hair ok to CG and stuff. Definitely looks OK as far as I'm concerned, perhaps give him some teeth to make him look a little meaner, but a great pic nonetheless.

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Stefanie
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Member # 293

posted 18-02-2005 04:06 AM

he could be the pet wolf to an anime character

and as long as no one else is complaining, I don't see why he can't post the wolf, I think it holds a certain anime type style look to it.

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 24-02-2005 07:45 PM

UPDATE!

Made some changes comments please

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Angelo
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posted 24-02-2005 08:32 PM

Nice addition with the teeth, definitely looks meaner. Is it me or have you added extra fur on this one?

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 24-02-2005 09:48 PM

The nose mouth area has been completely redrawn, it's a bit longer slopes up a bit more and is generally thicker. There is extra fur on the bottom of the mouth, I'm not sure if I like it or not

it was ment to show the front of the mouth (a bit like a beard

) more clearly.

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Si13Nt
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posted 24-02-2005 10:28 PM

looks wicked

TWO TUMBS FRESH

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Angelo
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posted 24-02-2005 10:42 PM

I think the extra fur works well. If there is one thing, I'd just say to add a few extra teeth on the upper mouth. Aside from that, it's a cool looking pic, and I can't wait for the CG.

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Schizotom
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posted 24-02-2005 11:29 PM

the second one seems more real and in deep space to use a cliched hogarth term. definitely better than the first when will it be cged?

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Tri_kento
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posted 25-02-2005 12:04 AM

I like i like, the little teeth add alot to the picture

good work kinda reminds me of my little wolf pic i drew in the fast sketches topic, tho mine was much worse.

GREAT STUFF

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 25-02-2005 12:18 AM

Angelo: Thanks for liking the fur i'll keep it and just for you so you dont have to wait too long i'll CG it soon

and some additional teeth may be added who knows!

Schizotom: It will probably be CGed over the weekend depends on how much work i have to do! But that is the plan that and finish my dragon lineart...

Tri: Thanks for the positive feedback cant see your dream wolf though links broken!

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Stefanie
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posted 25-02-2005 07:52 PM

wow, sorry i've not replied to your newest work, been moving >.< so anyways, I wanted to say it looks ten times better, you did a good job!!!! keep it up, and boy I hope you CG it!!!!!!

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Webb
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Member # 297

posted 21-03-2005 11:09 PM

Right Finally my workload has been reduced enough that i could take a couple of hours out to CG my Wolf!

And look there it is!

Crits and comments please will colour the lines and add a background sometime... then it will be added to the finished pics! Woo!!!

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Stefanie
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posted 22-03-2005 12:09 AM

ok first of all..congrats on a wonderful job, it looks so cute, and well done, and clean also,but...I really think you should accent the fur more...hmm...lemme put an example of how I do fur...

first as seen under the fur I put base colors in, then I take my brush and shade in a very simple set of colors ranging from light light purple to very dark purple, then I blur it and take the smudge tool to drag colors into each other, the prime use for the smudge tool is to creat the fur...thin lines that look like hair...

pose copyrighted to galagya, shaded by nightspiritwing (stefanie)

hmm I made a tutorial on how to shade fur, and such...i'll post it here in a sec.

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