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Tri_kento
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posted 17-03-2005 12:30 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well this drawing isn't done i think so yea, i'd like to cut the guy out and CG him, but wat ever here u go! My Drawing

enjoy

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Erock
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posted 17-03-2005 03:23 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey sweet man! its like fantasy and such oh and is that guy flying.... sweet!
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Tri_kento
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posted 17-03-2005 04:39 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
haha kinda i don't know weather he was jumping or flying, neh work ethier way,

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Jats1
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posted 17-03-2005 05:13 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
looking pretty good, I particularly like the dragon and the overall composition too. However there are some anatomy issues with the man. His legs are way too short, and should be positioned in a more dynamic way to show us whether hes jumping high or flying or whatever, at the moment it looks as though hes standing directly upright on firm ground and slightly rotated diagonally. Also his raised arm would make his shoulder raised also, so that its higher than the shoulder of the not raised arm.

Don't know if that makes sense, but I hope it helps

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Jats1
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posted 17-03-2005 05:26 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
heres what I mean !

only a crappy 5min scribble but thats what I mean about the pose

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posted 17-03-2005 09:17 PM     Profile for Angelo   Author's Homepage   Email Angelo     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Basically, pretty much what Jats said, but maybe you ought to have the dragon's mouth open or something that'll make it look more threatening to him. It would add to the dynamism of the picture overall. Aside from that, liking this one.

Oh, and congrats on Super Member status

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Tri_kento
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posted 17-03-2005 10:54 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
over all this drawing was just an little mix of everything, as u can see i tried a few diffrent moutain terrain stylesm few crap a few not as much, but blah. any who i plan to redraw the guy by himself, since i found myself spending way 2 much with the background, aaa besides that thanks 4 all the tips and congrats of the sort, kinda cool being the only super member, tho i think cloud is going to try and sneak the title away from me soon haha.

aa yea. really liked how this one turned out,
my sister said the guy looks alot like me haha kinda strange but i spos wat ever eh?

haha i hope to scan some more in soon! just need to get my ink pen back grr.

thanks a bunch agian.

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Erock
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posted 18-03-2005 01:40 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
yeah jats when you draw him your way it makes it like a super action shot and those are the ones you use for like comic booking and such... thats really cool that you did that
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posted 18-03-2005 02:16 AM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ok so i figured that if jats did it i should do it too...lol.

sorry tri for killing your origional pic but im just trying to help out. ok now the dragon has a full wind span, the tail is right behind the guy almost like the dragons gonna stab him in the back. the dragons claws are in full fight stance and the person and the dragon are making full eye contact. this is what a really action shot would look like and again sorry for chopping up your art

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Tri_kento
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posted 18-03-2005 02:26 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
aaa... the idea of the drawing isn't that the dragon and the mage are dukeing it out, the dragon was kinda asleep, and he's kinda waking up while the mage is kinda figureing out a spell for the beast. and in the same time the dragon is kinda giveing him that "o yea wat are u going to do" glare.

haha well anywho am working on my new drawing of just the mage.

if u folks want i can scan in my character 4 my maby up comeing comic, tho it's not really anime style well kinda but not really. it's more cartoony.

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posted 18-03-2005 09:08 PM     Profile for Stefanie   Author's Homepage   Email Stefanie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
it's good, but confusing, is the dragon asleep for real? it looks wide awake, and is the hero descending upon the dragon? also the anatomy on the top arm seems to be a bit odd...look at jats drawing he gives you an idea of placement? if the man is descending one knee should be raised again as shown by jats, it will look more like an attack rather then like he's falling. It looks good though, good start, hope to see the finished piece!

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Tri_kento
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posted 19-03-2005 07:43 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
no the dragon isn't asleep he just kinda woke up and is kinda pissed off but really minding the guy. The dragon doesn't find him a threat.

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posted 21-03-2005 06:13 AM     Profile for Stefanie   Author's Homepage   Email Stefanie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ok hmm...perhaps expressing that anger and annoyance in the dragon more...right now he just appears as if he's looking up at the hero...I don't find any emotion in his face. maybe that is just me, but seems like everyone else is having a hard time as well figuring out what is being expressed here. It's really good tri! don't think i'm dissing it! ^.^

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Tri_kento
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posted 21-03-2005 03:16 PM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hehe i spos i picked a to complicated idea.

I never thought u were dissing ? but neh wat ever

I'll have to post my new drawing of the mage soon. tho i think am going to have to redraw that one 2. can't seem to get legs and arms length to go right!

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posted 22-03-2005 06:22 AM     Profile for Stefanie   Author's Homepage   Email Stefanie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hehe alright, I just wanted to make sure you weren't thinking I was saying it was awful or anything! good job so far, will wait to see the new post

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posted 22-03-2005 06:24 PM     Profile for Webb   Email Webb     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Sorry about the time it took me to reply... well yeah nice pic especially liked all the green and red squiggles j/k

Right well i'm with Jats on it needing a more dynamic pose, liked the dragon but he/she didnt really seem to be related to the "hero" perhaps raising the angle of the head and opening the mouth a bit would have helped. oh and i think he/she (the dragon that is) needs bigger spiny bits running down the neck!

All in all nice starting piece and i look forward to seeing the revised "hero" when you sort out the proplems your currently encountering!

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Tri_kento
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posted 24-03-2005 05:09 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Well a little report on my status.

1- i have 98$ right now and am getting 40$ at the end of the week so blah that;s like...138$ I think?

any who I'll scrounge up 12$ and wait till the guy has my computer done and then badaboom bada bing lappy in my hands. nice thing about that Ibook is that it comes with photo shop 5 so that should help when CGing!

2- I've been working in my drawings and such, i think am starting to get back in my groove a little more at least now i can think of things to draw. just sometimes the hand doesn't agree haha.

3rd. i'd like to thank u guys 4 the thanks and tips and such. tho i doubt i'll remake this whole pic, seems like to much 4 not enough instertive. blah any who am going to go draw now since i feel like it really bad.!

happy sketching OG members!

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