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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 27-03-2005 10:50 PM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote

Boredom struck

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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 01-04-2005 04:19 AM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Bumping because everyone is ignoring me, but if it continues I shant post here again.

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Tri_kento
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posted 01-04-2005 05:19 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hehe chad feels rejected!!

blah cool pic, u should post the colored version.
for tips i'd say work on ur feet, u make it seem as tho he's flying or floating is he ? blah


(also note: it not very well respected to double post even tho it was a bump so people would notice)

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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 01-04-2005 06:57 AM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
I don't believe he's floating, but it very well could be as I haven't added an environment. I shall post the colored version, but its in a super sprite format, not a big one as that. I'm more of a super spriter(drawing Capcom vs SNK style sprites) than coloring drawings, so yeah. It'll be up soon, too tired to do it now though, and thanks for the tips.

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Jats1
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posted 01-04-2005 05:35 PM     Profile for Jats1   Email Jats1     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
he looks like hes about to fall over. Also the face could use some details. I like the stuff on his gauntlet thing, though I can't really see what it is.

I think the reason people found it hard tothink up comments is that it is something of a blank slate boday and head. try adding details, shading, folds, and especially a face, so that we can get an impression of the character, and then we can give more useful advice.

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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 01-04-2005 07:23 PM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
His hair covers his face, if you didn't notice. And its a bandana glove on his hand. And thats because I scanned it slanted by accident.

Thats a sheet of the guy, in super sprite form.
His hair IS finished, by the way, its just white, as well as his shirt.

[ 01-04-2005: Message edited by: Tri's Bringer of Warez ]

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posted 01-04-2005 10:26 PM     Profile for Erock   Email Erock     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey Tri's Bringer of Warez dude i love capcom vs snk and ive alawys had a huge respect for gifs of video games and all and the ones they draw for fighting games are oh man sooo good. heres a web site that has like every capcom, snk, sammy, marvel or anything fighting game gifs check it out. www.fightersgeneration.com


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Tri's Bringer of Warez
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posted 02-04-2005 07:25 AM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
A couple things. One, please talk much more understand able, and don't make a run on sentence. Two, I know many sites for stuff as such. And three, please don't act all suck up like to me, I dislike it, and if I come across harsh, then report me, but I don't like being sucked up to, especially wish such bad grammer and punctuation.

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posted 02-04-2005 03:11 PM     Profile for Webb   Email Webb     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Now I know this is completely off topic and I will leave some crits and comments at the end of the post. However, first I will like to say Tri's Bringer of Warez if you are going to insult somebody first think about it then dont do it! Secondly if your going to pick holes in peoples grammar or punctuation etc make sure that your own is up to scratch! I will now include a couple of examples from your post which were wrong,

1. You can not start a sentance with "and" new sentance new subject and can not start a grammaticaly correct sentance.

2. If you want to list a number of items which require more than a couple of words then use a ; to seperate them or use bullet points like i am!

3. What does your second point mean? its a sentance but it has no meaning as the subject of said sentance has been omitted.

Now I'm sure there are many more mistakes but I can't be bothered to talk about them here, I will however, say that in my opinion Erock was not sucking up to you at all in his post. From how I read it he was saying that he had a lot of respect for the people who drew the gifs/sprites in the games as I'm sure thats not you I fail to see how he was "sucking up".

Right now my rant is over I will comment on your drawings,

The larger one, (I have posted a rotated version below so hes standing upright) the right shoulder is raised for no obvious reason unless his bandana glove is really heavy! So i would recommend lovering the right shoulder slightly. His right leg is short or his left is too long as they are differnt lengths with nothing in the positioning of the body as to why, either lengthen or shorten the appropriate leg. With the face although the hair is supposed to cover it there would still be an indication of the nose at least.

The smaller versions seem to have addressed the shoulder problem and because of the scale the legs look alright as well, perhaps some work to remove the pixelation on the legs would improve the whole piece.

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posted 02-04-2005 07:55 PM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
It is the way he said things, it seems real suck up like, such as "ooo man soo good" or something along those lines, for one, that isn't even a proper statement. I also understand what you're saying, but I would still say that he should learn a little bit better grammer. I found his post a very annoying read for the fact that the first sentence was a run-on sentence.

And about my second point, I was making reference to his URL. "Two, I know many sites for stuff as such." was explaining I know many websites that have Capcom vs SNK animations on it, and also, I checked out the website he gave me, and there aren't any sprites on there, all the character pages don't go anywhere.

EDIT: Oh and about his leg, on the sprite, I just noticed his leg is a bit long, and I did correct his shoulder mishap in the sprites as well. And thanks for pointing them out, I'd have never taken notice to them if you didn't, thanks.

[ 02-04-2005: Message edited by: Tri's Bringer of Warez ]

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posted 02-04-2005 08:15 PM     Profile for Si13Nt   Email Si13Nt     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
ok dudes, i think we all need a nice warm mug of CHILL THE HELL OUT

and then we need to remember golden rule number 1:
its the internet....screw grammar, screw punctuation, no need to worry about em

you can type whatever crap you feel like and most people understand AND if they dont understand then they shouldnt be here, and if you get real pissy over ppl typing casually over the internet, then go join a book club or something where you can enjoy ur perfect grammar

but i think i speak for most ( certainly me anyway ) when i say no one cares about how you friggin type and where ur friggin ands go n how long ur damn sentances are...so just chill, im sure its not gonna kill ya, and im sure u'll get on with ur happy lives once the ordeal is over

thank you, i hope you enjoyed reading this as much as i enjoyed writing it

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posted 02-04-2005 08:59 PM     Profile for Stefanie   Author's Homepage   Email Stefanie     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
this forum seems notorious for posting wars. Tri's Binger, you pose was off balance, it was a true and honest critique. You didn't need to get so defensive about it. Everyone makes that mistake, I've made it tens of millions of times. From what I saw of the example of straigtening your pose by webb, you did not scan it in crooked. But that's my opinion. anyways, you signed yourself up for critique, so you got it. It's not being snooby or harsh or mean, it's critique. You should be able to handle this, or don't post your art. If you get to college critique will get even worse than what we post here, a teacher will out right tell you your are is as crappy as hell, and make you redo it, until you get it right. So we are't being high and mightly or however you put that. Heh, actually we are being nice. It is a wonderful drawing, however you ask for opinions and critique, heck you ever got angry about it, So we gave you critique. Next time just dont post your art if you cannot handle harsh critique that will help you draw better in the longrun. Thanks

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posted 03-04-2005 07:58 AM     Profile for Tri_kento   Author's Homepage   Email Tri_kento     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
hey, if u guys didn't notice tri'sbringerofwares kinda settled it, it's not a deal anymore so u don't have to post about it ok? NO PROBLEM OK!!?

any who, i can see both sides and understand them. erock sorry to say u did sound kinda brown nosed and well in real life i would of slapped u 4 the hell of it.

and to my friend tri'swares u kinda snapped craked on him were a simple get ur nose outa my ass would of worked just as well, but eh! water under the bridge if the board was a board crossing a river or some water mass. confused? good!

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posted 03-04-2005 09:55 AM     Profile for Schizotom   Author's Homepage   Email Schizotom     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
i think the picture is ok but he seems waay to static for it to look believable. i see you have got the arms looking v good but, the torso (seems a bit too long) and legs look wrong even on webbs straightened out one which makes me feel that the reason his legs are different lenghts has nothing to do with the way you scanned it anyhoo how can you scan something wonkilly??? yes the fae is good but the only reason i could see for not having eyes is that his face when inked may be in deep shadow? yes the legs if they were the same legnth still would seem odd because the trousers dont seem like the character is wearing them and just seems like their floating in front of his legs if that makes sense. the shoes seem okay but it seems as if hes doing ballet coz his left foot is pointing down like hes on tiptoes yeah overll it is okay but before you ink it i think these should be ironed out.

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posted 03-04-2005 09:44 PM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Sounds good. Oh, but I don't ink, I sprite. Thus what I posted before hand. I'm always afraid to do stuff like that, dunno why... Thats why I hate Art class... I'm afraid I'm going to mess up my picture...

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posted 05-04-2005 12:52 PM     Profile for Camdon   Author's Homepage   Email Camdon     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
My sig comes in handy!!!


Anyways, back to the topic....
You could try using some very dark lines in the hair to give it more depth. You could also make his left hand bigger, but not by much. That's all I seen that wasn't mentioned.

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posted 06-04-2005 04:51 AM     Profile for Tri's Bringer of Warez   Email Tri's Bringer of Warez     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks for your input, and your signature is quite correct.

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