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Cloud
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posted 30-03-2005 04:07 PM

I like this one too:

[ 30-03-2005: Message edited by: Cloud ]

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Jats1
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posted 30-03-2005 05:02 PM

Shows up as a red x for me

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Schizotom
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posted 30-03-2005 05:35 PM

yeah same here

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Stefanie
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posted 30-03-2005 08:23 PM

that's a GREAT red x you did! I love how you did the lining, and the color is juuuuust right!

hehe just kidding, yea I get a red X too!

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Webb
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posted 30-03-2005 08:29 PM

Yeah you gotta love that red X I hence forth shall name it...

"The Red X of Doom!"

Did you feel the power?!

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Cloud
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posted 30-03-2005 10:06 PM

Oh, I'll change it. Sorry

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Cloud
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posted 30-03-2005 10:07 PM

There, got it working

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Erock
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posted 30-03-2005 10:18 PM

wow the structure and balance of the red x is so perfect and so elegent i must save a copy and put it on my wall

. just kidding i see it. cloud im impressed thats a cool drawing. im liking your style!

i really like the hair and the face and the lines on her nose.

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Jats1
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posted 30-03-2005 10:48 PM

thats really quite an improvement. I think personally the head is a little too big, but thats basically all thats wrong with it. perhaps also add some slighter bolder lineweights to outline her hair.

Very nice though. keep up the good work

(also the first charcter ive seen posted in this section in some time thats able to maintain a vertical pose ;p)

*edit* oh and her hips should be wider

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Webb
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posted 31-03-2005 12:22 AM

Nice pic Cloud

Really nice head hair could do with a bit more weight to it perhaps.

Nice to see the little details like the necklace.

Also perhaps the transition from the waist to the hips needs to be a bit more (cant think of the word i want to use so i'll either make one up or say random stuff to try and get my point across) drastic or perhaps promonent was the word i was looking for nah cant think what it was anyway make the be a larger difference between the waist and the hips to give her a more mature feel.

Okay enough rambling for now...

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Stefanie
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posted 31-03-2005 08:15 AM

nice! I like it tons better than the red X anyways, it's good the only problem I see is she seems alittle unbalanced. From waist down she is super skinny, and from waist up she isn't thin, but has a build, so she's tad top heavy to me? but meh, opinion,goodjob

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Angelo
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posted 31-03-2005 01:22 PM

Nice work dude. I'd go with what Jats said about the head being a little big, and perhaps widening the hips, but I'm liking this one. Only thing I'd add is the hair is a little sketchy, just define the lines on that a little better.

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Cloud
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posted 31-03-2005 03:35 PM

Yeah, my friend was over and I liked his style a bit, he made the heads kinda big to give it more 'anime and manga' effect... so I tried it and he made his charas with sketchy hair like that, too. AND THIS IS NOT A LAME EXCUSE FOR ALL THE MISTAKES!!! But tat's the only things that his style did to me, everything esle wus me.

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Stefanie
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posted 31-03-2005 11:12 PM

it's is good you are exploring several styles and idea, however you must always keep in mind anatomy and proportions! good luck!

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