To fix it you only need to tweak it a tiny bit.

You may have had something in mind with some odd lighting when you planned to colour this- which would alter the direction of the highlights- in which case ignore me.

Also with hair (even crazy Manga hair) always remember where it starts from- and that's the crown and the parting. Here you have some lines going astray- which makes her fringe slightly un-natural.

Hope that helped.
~Dr.Funkenstein~

i must say nice drawings, be nice if u would of added some color to them but eh ? i like them none the less.