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evilone
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posted 02-08-2005 09:31 PM

here's it with some glare

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Erock
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posted 02-08-2005 09:49 PM

pretty good! You might want to look at other artist styles of eyes and copy them then you can pick and draw what style you like best. Question are you drawing form a palet and what kind is it?

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 02-08-2005 11:05 PM

palet??

u mean photoshop? i have photoshop 3.0 elements
i created the glare by doing the effects tab

edit: anyway keep on talking to me cause i g2g to ti-kuan-do (im a black belt ) I still don't know what ur talking about errok!

edit again: ok im back I see u never explained what ur talking about errok oh well anyone else like to comment on this?

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 03-08-2005 02:13 AM

no erock means do u have a slab of plastic that connects 2 ur compy and works as mouse but u can use a pencil instead of a mouse . look em up for a better details.

but i must say work on ur lines, that seems to be the biggest problems on this board is an unsteady hand, not that am perfect or better, just.. not quite as bad some. and yea...*foot in mouth* lol

but keep it up, cloloring is the suger u put on the cake, and surgar can only make a good cake taste better, sugar on a crummy cake that taste bad is well just sweet shit!.

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evilone
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posted 03-08-2005 02:23 AM

no i do not have the slab of plastic! i just work on it a lot this is like my fith or maybe tenth cging ever
and to think they only take like a few minutes! lol

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Si13Nt
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Member # 221

posted 03-08-2005 02:41 AM

dont use generic pre made effects n crap like lens flare ( guilty once i know

) and gradients n all that crap....its not big and its not clever, it just means you dont have the skills to do it yourself, and therefore means you suck, loads.

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evilone
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posted 03-08-2005 03:02 AM

oh now im guilty

sry didnt know!

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NZ Matt
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posted 20-08-2005 11:18 PM

It looks good, one improvement though, would be to mve the botom eyelash along to the right a bit.

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 21-08-2005 02:20 PM

dude you know how long this post is? well not that long but long enough for you to let it be...

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Schizotom
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posted 21-08-2005 02:29 PM

lol sorry to crack the trippy little bubble your in evil one but is there anyneed in posting an eye?? if you wanna get better click here:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/21056418/
right the whole eye youve drawn is shoddy and rather pathetic you should spend more time on drawing them and practicing than showing us the same old same again and again.

never use a lens flare on an eye it looks stupid whens the last time someone blinded you with the twinkle in their eye? learn to use dodge and burn and eyes aren't ussually big round blobs they have emotion and character so go and practice

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evilone
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posted 21-08-2005 02:35 PM

um i was asking on your opinion cause i was just working on them. geese

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Cloud
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posted 21-08-2005 03:19 PM

Well, you certainly are good at colouring...

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Tri_kento
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posted 21-08-2005 05:25 PM

Hehe take it easy evil one. As u said

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um i was asking on your opinion

And that's just wat Schizotom gave you.. be careful wat u wish for. haha.

..ummm I personally don't like it. it looks globy and.. very smush. but that can be fixed with practiceing ur lines and stuff.

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evilone
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posted 21-08-2005 08:23 PM

opinion i dont care the flashy toutorial i dont care for... besides how old is this?

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Bomu
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posted 25-08-2005 10:18 AM

The blue iris colouring is pretty good, but have to agree it's pretty "blotchy" and lacking crispness. Also, I will agree about lens flares. I don't think there's a member here who hasn't stuck a lens flare in one of their pics when starting out with Photoshop! Am I right?

However, they make artwork look really tacky and as Si13Nt said, it just shows you don't have the skills/ or are too lazy to create better looking effects yourself.

I've got nothing against filters providing they're done subtly - i.e a faint grain effect on a wall to give it some texture, but just a grain filter on it's own and calling it a background would truly suck!- my 2 cents

Schizotom, Cheers for the link. That's pretty much how I do eyes already and was surprised to see Ramy using the same dodged lines technique for the 'iris lines'.

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