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Schizotom
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posted 28-08-2005 12:03 PM
     
evilone: 1. her hair line needs to look more like hair at the moment it looks like a hat\wig. 2. as youve tried to draw her head at an angle you have miscalculated the overall shape so it looks stretched to the right. 3. that makes no difference because the whole pic needs redoing as it is all on a slant. 4. her neck is too manly and her eyes are too big. 5. her shoulders are too wide and her waist should curve outward when it comes to the upper torso. 6. her breasts are wrong  get some photos and practice drawing breasts.  7. the non curbiness of her body is exxagerated by her ass being way to flat. womens bodies tend to curve quite dramaticaly. 8. the arm on the right (our right) is too long or you haven't defined the elbow well enough. 9. the arm on our left is a tad wonky. also the hand is just a smidgen too small. 10. clothes need a lot of work as the creases seem arbitrary and put there without an understanding of why you are putting creases there. 11. creases are formed by gravity and movement. ie:
someones is running forward so the clothes are being dragged by their body in the direction of movement and will fall a bit due to gravity.
Hence on your pic i would say that the folds should eminate from the top left shoulder? (our left)and sweep down across her breasts ( taking into account that her breasts are round therefore the folds will fold ROUND them)
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Posts: 340 | From: York | Registered: Feb 2005 | IP: Logged
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Si13Nt
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posted 28-08-2005 02:16 PM
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Originally posted by Schizotom:
evilone: 1. her hair line needs to look more like hair at the moment it looks like a hat\wig. 2. as youve tried to draw her head at an angle you have miscalculated the overall shape so it looks stretched to the right. 3. that makes no difference because the whole pic needs redoing as it is all on a slant. 4. her neck is too manly and her eyes are too big. 5. her shoulders are too wide and her waist should curve outward when it comes to the upper torso. 6. her breasts are wrong get some photos and practice drawing breasts. 7. the non curbiness of her body is exxagerated by her ass being way to flat. womens bodies tend to curve quite dramaticaly. 8. the arm on the right (our right) is too long or you haven't defined the elbow well enough. 9. the arm on our left is a tad wonky. also the hand is just a smidgen too small. 10. clothes need a lot of work as the creases seem arbitrary and put there without an understanding of why you are putting creases there. 11. creases are formed by gravity and movement. ie:
someones is running forward so the clothes are being dragged by their body in the direction of movement and will fall a bit due to gravity.
Hence on your pic i would say that the folds should eminate from the top left shoulder? (our left)and sweep down across her breasts ( taking into account that her breasts are round therefore the folds will fold ROUND them)
nerd
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Ezekiel 25:17 The path of the righteous man is beset on all sides by the inequities of the selfish and the tyranny of evil men. Blessed is he, who in the name of charity and good will, shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is truly his brother's keeper and the finder of lost children. And I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance and furious anger those who would attempt to poison and destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon thee.
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