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Topic: deepdive fanart
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Jay
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posted 31-10-2005 03:14 PM
hmmmm evilone... I see a lot of your images, i think perhaps you should slow down producing images, and just work on 1 for a bit longer, a little bit more experimentation in the computer coloring too, i havnt personaly tried to color on a pc, well not in a manga style anyway, so by no means do i think im any better, but each of your images seem....im not sure smudged or sloppy, just rushed on the whole, oh and the kinda umm they dont stand up properly lol i got some images im gnna scan on, i havnt colored them yet, just doodles from class this morning. now that im done with the crit. i think its a nice image, just needs more time spent on it.Oops : The background is what let down the image in my opinion edit : my bad, the background is really good, perhaps give a few more levels to the clothing, it seems 2D folds, creases blah blah you get the idea [ 31-10-2005: Message edited by: Jay ]
Posts: 11 | From: Romford | Registered: Oct 2005 | IP: Logged
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