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Yuki H.
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Member # 199

posted 18-09-2005 04:34 PM

Have you noticed my work is NEVER complete..?

I am too lazy, that is the answer. (School is another reason)

._. I have a lot of other drawings, but I never put them on DA. *sigh*

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I drew this while I was supposed to do my math homework in the middle of the night, but then I got distracted and drew this. ._. I am a horrible procrastinator, but I did finish my homework.

Crits are welcome.. Thank you!

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Cloud
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Member # 276

posted 18-09-2005 04:36 PM

wow

saskatchewan baby! duh duh duh duh duh bat man
Amazing! I really like that

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Angelo
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posted 19-09-2005 12:01 AM

Wow, you really have come very far Yuki. No worries about half-completedness, happens to me all the time

. Anyways, enough arse-kissing, time for advice:
- Dunno if it's me, but her midsection and chest seem slightly thin, might do with a bit (and I mean a tiny bit) of widening.
- HER right arm, more specifically, the forearm, seems a little thin, almost like it might break, make that just a bit bigger and the hand will look better.
Overall, I like the clothes especially, you seem to have dealt with the complexities of them very nicely. Keep it up!

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Bugsy
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Member # 9

posted 19-09-2005 12:25 AM

This looks amazing indeed!

I don't really see the things Angelo pointed out as problems, but I do think the open eye is a bit too low, it's a bit freaky

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Erock
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Member # 189

posted 19-09-2005 03:25 AM

love the style, love the look, i love everything about that pic! nice job

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 19-09-2005 05:41 AM

Wow ! nice work yuki once agian it seems u've super improved!. great work

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evilone
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Member # 347

posted 19-09-2005 07:12 AM

my best friend(girl) and her twin sister would love the clothes

the weirdos

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NZ Matt
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Member # 354

posted 19-09-2005 10:19 AM

yuki...you just inspired me to draw...

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 21-09-2005 02:33 AM

XD *swttt*
Thank you everyone..
._. yeah, everyday I improve somehow.
It is the jats shake I am drinking.
*cough*

Thank you for the crits angelo, uhhh, the forearm thing... .__. I don't see it..

With her waist, I guess I have that problem when I draw her.. Lets say she crammed her chassy into a very tight corset that magically made her chest area thinner than the rest of the body. XD

Glad that I inspired someone to draw. *is happy*

[edit] *Looks at eye* You got a point... ._8338324&&&& X_x I didn't notice that, thank you!

[ 21-09-2005: Message edited by: Yuki H. ]

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Zankouken
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Member # 203

posted 21-09-2005 08:28 AM

Good picture Yuki she is very cute.
My crit though is with her right arm. At the point where it joins the body it is very wide forcing her torso to be thin. I suppose to remedy it you could move her armpit further over (our left, her right) and widen her chest a bit.

[ 22-09-2005: Message edited by: Zankouken ]

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Si13Nt
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Member # 221

posted 21-09-2005 05:43 PM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

all that and a bag of 'potato chips'

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Jats1
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posted 21-09-2005 05:43 PM

looking good.. lets have a cg now!

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NZ Matt
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Member # 354

posted 22-09-2005 08:12 AM

im serious, i drew like, 2 cool keepable pics after that.

btw, love the avitar, have you got a buisness?

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Yuki H.
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Member # 199

posted 23-09-2005 05:42 AM

Oh, oh! =OO
Thank you for more crits, too bad I am not gonna edit the picture. bad idea anyway..

T-T I do hope I have time to CG it or something..

Uhhh, buisness!??!?!?! ._. I am only 13.

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Yuki H.
Grand Member

Member # 199

posted 27-09-2005 01:24 AM

@_%% Literally, I drew more..
Link I never drew a straight pose in a long long long long long while.. It feels so strange.

Thiswas an art trade with Ranu. Her character Lan, she said she loved my style and wanted to see what Lan would look like if I were to ever draw her, I just added a bit extra to her.
I just love her cute drawings.

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Tri_kento
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Member # 194

posted 27-09-2005 06:42 AM

very classy yuki! am loven it. with eye's lower on the head it gives off the effect of the person being younger, well it's does to me. mabye am just stupid...

For crits , i'd say watch ur hair line, ur making it look like she's trying to do a comb over from the back of ur head to the front... not to be rude but.. it does

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